pretty readable indeed, it was fantastic :)

Haha, I Don't Care What Anyone Says I Think This Chapter Is So Amazing! I Love It, Well Done :)

Loved it! You really wrote them both very well. :)

Kar, xx

This was a good piece, but there were a few errors. It was way better than I could've done that late. You can still write this late, if you want to, just spell-and-grammar-check it later! There were some words that didn't need to be capitalized.

Keep writing,

~Ivy

Ha ha ha. I think its pretty good for something written at that time. Most of the stuff I write around that time are full of angst...goes to show what the dark does to me. H aha ha

Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!)

What Do You Mean The Results Are Not Good?

I Love This Fic It's So Cute!

Another Fabulous Story :D

Late night or not, it's still well written. 'Merlin Wasn’t really thinking anything.' I actually laughed out loud at that. Classic.