love this so much. I'm super excited to read the sequel. You know you've made a great story when it's loved even after 10 years. It's a little weird thinking that the first Twilight Saga movie hadn't even come out yet when this was made. Anyway, I just thought I'd write a long review for the last "chapter." ONCE AGAIN, love this!

that is a whole lotta baby imprints

amazing.
that's all I have to say

this is great! Thanks for making to so long!

i don't think Edward would have reacted like that.

i love it 3

I thought it held true to the characters for the most part. Enjoyed reading it

I like it. It seems like an actual book in the series and you got the characters behaviour perfect. Thank you for sharing

It really feels like a Twilight book but my one downside is the spelling mistakes but even then that’s not that big :)

Omg Alyssa And Reneesme so funny. Lol and Emmetts "World War 12 Is officially over" LMFAO hahha

Omg that's hilarious. There actually acting like teenagers and yst still kind of adult. That's awesome

It's the best story(fan fiction) I've read!

Wish you good luck_love the story!

I REALLY love your Renesmee! She is very loveable!

YAY! GO LEAH!

This is a bad chapter to say this in, but, I love the humor. I also love your version of Renesmee.