Reviews for Taking Liberties
Guest chapter 1 . 9/6/2018
There are several things I don't like about this story. Bella is a sufficient woman, do you really expect us to believe that she would SHARE a bed with Edward? Surely she would make herself a makeshift one or vice versa.
I don't like that she gives her feelings away in her sleep. I doubt a man of that time would speak of fucking whores in front of a woman and that's basically what Edward did. Im surprised that Bella didn't have more to say about that.

I man in that time with soft woman hands? What a dandy. Does he wear blush and fuck boys too?
fanfictionalcolic chapter 2 . 4/9/2018
Great
FrankieDees chapter 1 . 2/3/2018
Hope you get this published! I would for sure read it! You have no idea how many times I have gone back to this OS! ️
kmcwherter chapter 2 . 2/13/2017
Where you able to publish? I would absolutely love to read this story!
dianscot chapter 1 . 3/22/2016
Lovely
war123 chapter 2 . 8/27/2015
Is your book out yet? If so where can I purchase it?
Melolabel chapter 1 . 10/25/2013
So when is this being published? And how do I get my hands on a copy?!
sassy41 chapter 1 . 7/7/2013
wow such hard times and she has done it for 7 years alone
bella is a strong women and will make edward a wonderful wife

love it and can't wait for more
emm721 chapter 2 . 4/18/2013
Great story! I would love to read more, hope it gets published!
hmmtwin chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
Lovely story, thanks!
kselzer chapter 2 . 11/26/2012
I would love to read more of the story but fanfiction doesn't show your entire web address, could you please direct me to it?
sillyvamp chapter 2 . 11/3/2012
Good luck with your book. :)
magdalenad chapter 1 . 10/29/2012
Ah i love it!
janneyt chapter 2 . 10/16/2012
Can't wait to read your novel, you are a great writer and you deserve to be published!
Holidai chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
This was a beautiful story, simply lovely. I loved your attention to detail.
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