It was amazing. I cried 'cause I love Axel.

Axel, you can have my heart, don't die! lol, is it bad that I have a saved file right before that scene in the game, just so I can watch it... Great story, I can almost see this being part of the game that happens off screen. It makes me wonder how that conversation between Roxas and Sora would go though.

Wow, that was nicely done! Good job! I loved the mysterious edge it had to it and I thought it was intensely written.

Haha...I started reading up on Kingdom Hearts because SO MANY of my favorite authors also write in (or have switched to) that fandom. And I really liked the fic! Unfortunately, I don't know the game well enough to really critique your characterization (I don't play video games because they stress me out...weird, huh? So what I know comes from reading about the game online. Also weird.), but I can tell you that I really enjoyed the story and that the characters felt real. And it was great! :D

This was such a beautiful story for a oneshot. I love how it changed from trying to see Roxas, to finally seeing Sora. Such a sad ending but still I loved it all the same :)

I'm crying.

Good sign that your writing and story is really,damn,bloody good.

Damnit...I wanna play Kingdom Hearts...sniff...

Great story.

this was so sad... its kind of funny... no matter what fic I read or how much I think about it, there's no way this couple can work. I still love them though and am writing a fanfic about them but between Axel and Sora I just think it will always be unrequited.

Yay! Great story. It's actually possible. Horray for cannon! (becuase everyone knows that Kingdom Hearts is SO cannon yaoi)

OH. MY. GOSH.

this fic is so amazing!

it's absolutly beautiful.

i cried at the end even though i knew it was coming (:

wow that was awesome

i came really really close to crying at that end part...

'cause i DID cry the first time i saw him fade.

great job

"Axel doesn't have a heart, so he needs yours. :("

You have it 3

This is exactly how I see axel/sora(roxas) and I love it so.

Oh, I really loved this. It was absolutely beautiful, especially the end.

AXEL'S NOT DEAD, HE'S JUST HIDING, DAMMIT!

(denial much?) ;)

Good job, anyways.

~LWD~

So sad! But so good! Sora needs a hug!

Oh, ow, this is so pretty and heart-breaking and ;_; asdjklsjkl *incoherent puddle on the floor* And it's Axel/Sora *_* akjdfkljadkfj; 3 3 3

That was so sweet ahahaha.

LOVES it.

Makes me want to play the game again.

...damnit.