Oml

this was cool!

Okay, this chapter was...confusing as hell honestly. I'm glad it's not an OC/OC I got scared for a minute...but, how can her parents have gotten to the "normal" world if they were ninja. And how the hell did Kenshori get there to kill them...? Aside from that, why is everyone acting so bi-polar and confusing? And since when is Itachi ever scared of anyone...-.- Sorry, I guess I'm a bit of a skeptic.

I'm more than a little confused by the shift of tone this story has taken from the light, humorous and totally OOC mood it held at the beginning, to the nose-dive into the dramatic, somber and slightly depressing it gained these past few chapters. The characters were all fluffy-wuffy at first, then when they got her back to the ninja world, it was like the more indifferent stance they should have had toward Kumori in the beginning, came out in reverse? Instead of being cold then warming up to her, they start warm then get cold? Or is it just me?

luv it

Heyy im a little slow but i just started reading this story and i was wondering if you could possibly write a one-shot for my oc character, Kira Uchiha, with either orochimaru, sasuke, or tobi/madara? *puppy eyes* my birthday is the 28th . thnx

Hi! I love your story! One question, you said you have posted a sequel.. Does that mean that this one is finished? If it is, you should label it a complete...

That's all! Oh, and I can't wait to read the sequel! :)

~ME!

(aka MashumelloKage)

okayz

She's taking this a little well, but you may have a reason for that, I guess. Oh, and thank you for censoring, even though I know what they're saying. :)

love the story~! is it complete?

cute

:o *getting interested* But off to class now...I hate you college, you take away fun time with classes and essays URGH!

"You know, that kinda looked like you were bowing down to me. For a second, I thought I wasn't going to have to kill you." Kenshori jokes as he plays with the kunai like a toy.

Kenshori is SO BAD A$$! :D

"News flash: I can't sing to save my life and only High School Musical kids can do that. Last time I checked, I was in Tokyo, Japan. Not Where-ever-they-filmed-that-movie, America. Probably Hollywood. Everything is filmed in Hollywood. Except stuff that isn't but that's beside the point.

LOL XD I HATE high school musical. But I love this line. XP

This story is really good! Though I have to say PLEASE make the sequel soon! I wanna find out what happens!