máassssssss!

You know, you say your writing was mediocre but I highly disagree. I had to physically stop myself from crying from the Highly Hurt Depressed Future Teen's Angst (TM), and boy. Its good.

Thank you for writing this, even if its not finished and it might never be. It was a delight to go through all, and I do hope you kept writing through the years.

loved it,but where are the next chapters. plz wright more chapters plz plz plz.

Sigh... :( I wish there was more. Poor gohan.

I know im years late but pls don't stop ! Keep going

Wow, spooky but very interesting. I sense a possible tie...

OMG UPDATE ASAP!

hello
i am not so good in reviewing (i am coming from gremany), but i am doing my best :D
i like your story and your idea , because of that i am really sorry that you arent continue this story.
i hope that maybe someday you will find your way back to this story. i neeeeed to know how it ends with mirai gohan and how the others will react to his past and secrets.

bye
chiara d.

I've been meaning to review this for a while, sorry for being too lazy .

I love this story, You have kindled a new love within me for Mirai Gohan. I like how this is quite fast moving, I never get even slightly side tracked which is awesome and the dialog is intelligent and compelling. I'm dying to know what happened with Trunks' death but I realise this hasn't updated for a while so probably abandoned? (sad face)

Anyway, just thought I'd spread the love for this amazing story! Thanks

awesome awesome awesome!

it cool

awesome story

I kinda like it. Please update.

great

great