Awwww, at least they were together and (maybe) going into another world together! Cudios my friend, you story is a one of kind and loved it dearly!

WHY WHY WHY?! Boooooo, I wasn't expecting them to die! *cries*

OMG! I can't believe that happened! Blah!

Man! I can't believe this chapter, I wasn't expecting them to be all injured at the end! My heart is reeling with anticipation!

So much fluff I'm puking rainbows and butterflies! LOL! No, it's really cute how love-dovey they are towards each other since Auron had to control his emotions for so long. As far as I can tell, he was way over due and diffidently showing it! Hope to read more about Raine's chance in this society since she is just getting the hang of being a Spiraian (sp?)!

Awwww, about stinkin' time they showed how much they loved each other. I found the proposal fast, but apparently it was love at first sight!

By golly Auron you better tell her how you feel cause she's suffering!

Just started reading your story tonight and it's fresh and exciting. Nice to see a "what if" in terms of Auron living and how he would go on in the new "Eternal Calm." I just read a story yesterday that dealt with a girl from a America and entering Spira, pretty funny! Can't wait to read more!

Interesting that the story continues past death's eternal grasp. I am looking forward to what will happen next.

I'll be watching,

Der commissar

omg...this story had me completely enthralled from start to finish. i've never really given much thought to what might've happened to Auron if he hadn't died; for me, i guess, it always seemed like his role was that of the unending Guardian, even in death. and i guess he was, especially in this story. it was wonderfully written, with tons of OC's - each with incredibly intricate character development - and quite possilby the best 'Auron' fanfic i have ever read. thank you so much for sharing this incredible adventure with us. :D

MFG

I LOVE IT! I cried so much! This is the best story EVER! Not even kidding. You are an amazing writer! I'll even read this story again! 3 :)

awww, they are sooo cute! this is such a good story!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE it!it's so good!

It just gets better and better! I LOVE this, you should really consider writing a book one day. (that is what i'm doing)your story is so great! keep writing!

That was really awsome! I want to be a writer like you!

So far there is nothing you should change!