So. I have to admit when I saw this (interesting how I found you, by the way) I thought right away that it was going to be a game of strip poker... then I started reading it and I was like, aw, no strip poker. Then when they failed for the last time I was like, ha ha, yeah that was pretty good...

Then I was like heck yeah strip poker!

Then the story felt complete, buhaha. Very awesome, thanks for writing this.

Oh the only thing I feel obligated to point out is that you used 'loose' instead of 'lose,' when Riza was apologizing after telling Roy to keep his hands to himself.

ahahahaha! that was funny! i wish you continued that!

lol Havoc is so funnie! aw they should have gone with the dare 3

I get the feeling Riza was just acting to get him into that situation. How deliciously evil.

Hahaha. XD

That's so funny!

Another chapter, please? :D

LOL! The end made me laugh! Really funny, and kind of sweet! I can't wait to read more!

funny ending :))

silvergothicsweettoth

update soon... :)

Great I want to know what happens next,would love to read the second chapter but it seems you posted chapter one a second time. Please post the next chapter!

Fun! But I think you accidentally re-posted Chapter 1 where Chapter 2 should be?

I don't know if you've noticed, but the second chapter is identical to the first one.

hahahah... nice one! Keep on writing dude...

wow! the story's cute!

Another chapter?

thanks!

silvergothicsweettooth

Aw, man! Too funny! I wish I had thought of that-STRIP POKER! Please, do some more! You could do a sketch of the military crew... oh, I don't know, learning to club dance? Running a kissing booth? Cooking pie? Attempting to pick up women (and getting schooled by Hawkeye, who points out that all the women they're getting rejected by are lesbians-then kisses one to prove the point-that would be hysterical!)