Your first story was intriguing enough to persuade me to check out some of your other work, so here I am again.

As I began reading this story, my initial opinion was that it sounded just like one of those classic Christmas carols. That was before I reached the dark twist, which made the story feel demented. Perfect! No flames or complaints here. Some parts were certainly shocking and I suppose that’s what you were aiming for. Other than that, it was a fairly funny story. I liked the references to classical literature and historical authors. “No, not the raven!” That was a good laugh. Those elements made the piece feel more intelligent.

The conversation between Sasami and the operator during the emergency call was funny. I also found the initial confusion of the SAT and JSDF concerning when they should open fire to be quite a riot. You get extra points for doing your research on those organizations, by the way. The scene with the real Santa was done rather well. Tenchi’s reaction to Sasami’s present was also rather amusing. In conclusion, I knew it wouldn’t have a happy ending. This story was alright. More accurately, it was a well rounded romp of suspense and humor with a touch of horror.

Good work.

I finally got around to finish reading this fic... very very amusing! The only thing wrong: YOU SAID THE WORST WORD IN THE WHOLE WORLD!crimbo... *shivers*

Ah, so this explains why I woke up on Christmas morning to find my family missing, and lots of bloody bones under the tree. Heh. Funny fic. _

What a wonderful piece to have about during this bittersweet time of year when stores everywhere are insisting that more cash can be stored in a pine than in a pumpkin. By comparison this defilement of a children's hero is a small insult but still one of the (directly) funniest fanfics I've ever read.

PS:

'Bloody Bones' for the bad kids? Is this a European thing or just a British thing...or perhaps a new tradition you intend to start?

James:Yet another Funny M.A Story..You could be the next Terry writeing a Discworld FanFic.I wish the'd show this on Chrismas Morning instead of the usal 'The Great Escape'Tripe.

-snif- Beautiful! Very funny!I have to admit... it was Way long! You're very lucky a girl like me has no life. So how've you been? hhe.

Had to ask, to be nice, How come i'm the second person reviewing this? I know how you feel.

You work soo hard and it seems like no one cares... -sigh- but you have TWO ppl now! I only have one! hehe.

Well have funn writing~

_~Washu, Princess of the Monkeys~ {aka: Artemis}_

ja ne!

What? What? Noone has reviewed this yet? Why the hell not? This is the best Tenchi Christmas fic out there! So original...It could only be written by some dude from the U.K! I approve of much this superpowerful.