some grammar errors here and there but overall it's a fantastic story

I like how when writing for Bit and Leena moments you can almost write any sarcastic comment in for Bit and as long as it's even a tiny bit funny it works for his character.
Good story by the way!

this story was amazing top job!

Damn... Glad I read this.

Wow, and Raven fell for it so easily. What an idiot. Not to mention that the Count's explanation about a world government doesn't explain the existence of Backdraft and the cryogenics to Raven, so he should be suspicious of that.

I would like to point out that, in the battle story, when Berserk Fury and Liger Zero teams first fought on the Dark Continent, the Furies nearly wiped out the Zeros. Bit, in a Liger Zero, defeated Vega, in a Berserk Fury. In the show. This is despite the fact that Berserk Furies were basically the hard-counter to Liger Zeros. That shows that Bit is a significantly better pilot than Vega.

It is like a tank defeating a jet fighter through sheer skill.

Having bit and brad join is stupid they are blitz team van Irvine and moonbeam will need to make money to continuously search the only way for them to make decent amounts if money is to form a battle team and take battles as they search for Fiona that means bit and brad can compete with them since they are tem blitz not team guardian force so travelling with them is pointless they should get team blitzs phone number so whenever they need info on people they can call and ask

Yo, Uh. Word. Adjective. Pronoun. Adverb.
Run on and on and on.
Where my gerunds at?
Parenthetical, uh.

Shit motherfucker ass tits cunt cock motherfucker shit ass tits motherfucker shit
Come on
Fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

Shit motherfucker ass tits cunt cock motherfucker shit ass tits motherfucker shit
Come on
Fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fickity-fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck fuck

You take some shit, put it up on the wall, check it out for a while.
You take that shit up off of the wall, put it down on the floor in a glass bowl.
You take some fuck, put it up on the wall where the shit used to be.
You take that fuck up off of the wall, put it down on the floor
with the shit in a glass bowl
What? Yo, here's another little piece of advice-vice

You take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

It's a stack of fuck-shit on top of itself, nigga

I make references to weaponry
Ancient, on you
I wear bullet-proof vests for no apparent reason
other than to create a false sense of importance
of which I could never retain on my own.
I like to create a buffer memory of incredulity
So y'all motherfuckers could never get near to me.

I'm a cartoon character.
You'll never be able to be like me! (me me)

I like women
I like women
I like the concept of a woman
I like to take that concept and reduce it to an object
I like to take those objects and put 'em in my videos
Have them shake they jiggly bits so they looks like hoes

I like to take some car polish, smear it all over they asses
and buff that shit out so it looks like fresh peaches and shit.
I like to take some more of that car polish and smear it all over they tits
and buff that shit out so it looks all sparkly, like diamond necklaces and shit.

Why?

Cuz I'm a lady's man
a lady's man
a la-la-la-la-la-la-la-la-lady's man

I'm a materialist.
I'm a materialist.
I'll take a piece-of-shit car and I'll lower the motherfuckah;
Put some 18-inch rims on the motherfuckah;
Take some neon, put it underneath the motherfuckah
so when I roll around this town it looks like a hover (hover hover)

I like to take a flat-panel display monitor,
put one on the steering column,
one inside of the glovebox,
one on top of the dashboard,
two in back of the headrests,
one mounted in the ceiling,
two still in the motherfucking packaging, on the back seat
so when my motherfucking friends go and sit on the shit and break it (word?)
I can honestly say:

I. Just. Don't. Give. A. Fuck.

You take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

Take some fuck then some shit
then some fuck then some shit
You've got a fuck-shit stack
A fuck-shit stack

It's a stack of fuck-shit on top of itself, nigga

Yo, where my girls at?
Where my girls at?
Where my grills at?
Where my grills at?

Where my girls at?
Where my girls at?
Where my grills at?
Where my grills at?
(Where is they?)

Fuck shit, fuck shit,
Fuck shit, fuck shit

Fuck shit, fuck shit,
Fuck shit, fuck shit

Will there be a sequel?

Wow. Just... wow. Beyond epic, and the door left blindingly open for a sequel, too. I hope that a sequel is in the works, because it just doesn't feel right to leave things unresolved as they are.

Until next time, my friend.

-Shodaime Shisarakage-

I gotta say, this is a phenomenal story you've created. Is it wrong to think you might make a sequel? Cause that would just fantastic. Please keep up the great work.

Fantastic story all the way through! I absolutely loved it!

OMG this...I love this! Thank you for writing such an amazing story and sticking with it all of these years. This story is wonderful start to finish. And that cliff hanger at the end :D I look forward to more of your work!

are going to bring Reese back

And so we come to the last great battle of our time. We have both everything and nothing to lose, and so it is with great hope that we offer one final prayer of safety and success.

Van Flyheight, I wish you all the luck in the Universe.

-Shodaime Shisarakage-