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Just finished the My Queen liked it, interesting storyline one I like to see where you take it to. Don't wanna say this to be annoyance as a lot of writers don't like been annoyed for updates. But rouque its been officially 3 years since Chapter 25 teaser was posted up. Is a complete chapter 25 going to posted with more chapters, is "My Queen" discontinued, are you rewriting it, on hold, writer's block, lost interest in it and can others continue it.

Just knowing what the situation, the status quo on My Queen is would satisfy on what to kind of expectations to have.

Regards

I have not been able to put this story down! The characters and plot are fantastically written and wonderfully multi dimensional. I'm following the story on the chance you decide to finish it, because if you ever do, I want to be front and center :D I believe it could have one great ending!

Your story truly is awesome! Please, please, please continue and update : D I love the way you describe everything in vivid details and I can't wait to read more! It would be a shame to end it here with so many cliff-hangers : P and with such an amazing plot!

Please continue! This is brilliant!

I like the story. Especially the situations the characters Jennifer and todd are in.
The gradual personality changes that keller is undergoing excellent and powerplays
of the wraith and the psychologist. Plenty of us have asked when a next update is
but its been nearly a year. So could you please tell if the story is going to be updated or
remain unfinished.

Cheers.

Hi Rouque

Long time fan of My Queen. Its probably the best Todd/Keller story around. I really like situation keller's in on atlantis charade with rodney, hiding the truth about the pregnancy, adapting to the powerplays of the top dogs in atlantis especially those of Blanchard and her slowly becoming more queen like. One way to progress the story could be a time jump of several to 6-8 months with flashbacks to cover the changes over the period for the characters progression over the period to near end of the pregnancy. Overall keller's slow shift to that of the wraith's/todds is the best part.

I know you've been asked/nagged plenty but its just days short of a year since the last update could us fans get a timeframe for next one, notification if story is discontinued or something please.

I just finished ch 25. Please continue!

The relationship might not have had much opportunity to develop yet- after all, Todd and Jennifer haven’t even been in the same solar system since she stopped being his ‘guest’- but the possibilities are still fascinating, and your exploration of the tension between them continues to impress.
Your exploration of Todd’s thoughts on his nature as a Wraith come across very well, accepting what he is even as he nurtures a hatred for the Ancients for their role in his creation, to say nothing of your complex exploration of his own interest in Jennifer prompting him to fight what he desires to do to her as a Wraith compared to what he wants to do to her as a ‘man’ (Or at least the part of him that doesn’t think of humans as food) and spare her from what he has become; very ‘Coppola’s Dracula-esque’, when you think about it. Jennifer’s own interest in Todd is handled in an equally fascinating manner, fighting to remember what he is and does to exist despite his natural presence and the various qualities that leave her ‘unwillingly’ drawn to him (In the sense that she partly wishes she wasn’t attracted to him rather than him forcing himself on her completely; it might be warped, but it’s always come across as natural).
Your ideas and insights into Wraith culture also continue to impress, presenting a fascinating contrast between born Wraith who have never known anything else and the elders such as Todd who accept their current state but are reluctant to ‘pass it on’ (Even if I found the spiritual implications of Wraith feeding to be a slight step too far; fascinating concept, but it raises some disturbing questions about what happens to those the Wraith feed on in the aftermath), to say nothing of your theories about how human/Wraith sex might actually work, exploring the issues beyond just their obvious physiological compatibility.
Things after Jen and Todd return to their separate lives also continue to impress, presenting us with a dramatic twist on the large and small scale as each find themselves unknowing pawns in the plans of others, ranging from Todd’s underlings intending to steal the enhanced Hive to Janine Blanchard’s undefined but undoubtedly questionable agenda on Atlantis (Nobody with good intentions would think that casually about ‘using’ people)…
Hope we won’t have to wait too long for the full chapter/next chapter; this story just continues to intrigue, and that’s BEFORE Todd and Jennifer’s new relationship becomes more public in Atlantis…

the thing which unnerved me was you used the sentence:
her feed touched the cold floor
way to often, ya we got that, the floor was cold :D
but i imagine the hive to be warm somehow

and you stuck so much in cannon with the whole wraith story and where they came from and i loved they hierarchy stuff you described, but why the hell would they sleep in beds if they would 100% use those tentacle-doors instead? i think that kind of turn out would have been way hotter.

well i love the tension, but you way overdo it with adjectives, is an overkill of emotions, if you had strayed them more rarely it would have made far greater impact

i love the dripping enzyme part, hot hot hot :3 kind like dripping wraith :D

and i kinda hate jens situation pregnant and in a room full with enemies who could send her home any friggin time, gosh i would hate that, .. i hoped so bad you would just simply turn her slowely into a wraith, but no god dammit she's pregnant -.- no pls why? (my worst nightmare)
her doughter/son would have way too much trouble to get accepted by wraith or human, i really dislike this idea

and jen lives near by the river it seems, she is just on crying the whole friggin time!
after 6 months in a hive of figgin aliens i would expect her to get some guts together and stand her ground, but she is still like a puppy leaning on others to survive the day ...

besides that, i like your story .. mostly because there is so much wraith activity in it :)

wishes for future development:
- well make it happen that she is not pregnant and this was some kind of mistake _ i just hate the idea :'(
- make todd more hard and vicious! :3 so he wipes the floor with those idiots dare to challange him
- NO MORE CRYING on jens part PLS!
- i like , please don't make him look like a complete idiot, running after jen and fullfill her wishes just to get dished in a corner

well it would be a SHAME if this GIANT story would find no end, gl on future writing, i hope i will be still interested in the famdom, should you descide to finish this
and gj

Oh, come on now... what's happening? :)

:) Happy Dance - or is this a teaser to keep us interested for the next year! Please update and finish this awesome story.

Oh no, just this short but excellent teaser!

I had to reread some of the last chapters cause yes, it's been too long before this update.

I hope you will make us forgive you with a next and longer chapter! ;-)

That said, I always appreciate so much this story and the way you describe Todds' reactions and speeches!

thank you.

OMG you have updated, and a teaser it is...what will Woolsey ask, what did John say and Todd...please please, some more!
Soon I hope and thank you for sharing your story with us it's amazing!