I'd think Hinata would be Princess. What made you choose Sun?

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This was a great story, and I love your portrayal of Dumbledore.
I just got so angry at the Wizards - I mean, who do they think they are?! They act like its the ninjas' duty to fight the war with them. They just seem so self-righteous and judgmental.
Not that any of that made the story any less good - that was just my ranting. Anyway a, good story. I'd probably read the sequel if you ever write one.

Wonderful story!
It had an excellent twist that I haven't seen in any other crossover about naruto and harry potter so far, and your story was well written.

that was great
nice story

I read this fic purely out of curiosity, wanting to see if Naruto cross Potter could even work. And I'm happy to say that you did a great job of working the two together and making it into an interesting story, at least in my opinion. Great work.

I just love this story! It's awesome! I really love the way Dumbledore unexpectedly betrays them, and the heated exchanges between the wizards and the ninja (plural) and... well, I just love it: it's really awesome. XD

Hmm, I liked most of the story, but I feel like you portrayed Dumbledore in the wrong manner. Yes, he isn't wholly good, everyone has their flaws, but to be honest, I didn't even recognize the 'Dumbledore' that you were writing. Dumbledore from the books/Movies wouldn't act the way you had him acting. Blackmail isn't his style, he would give fair compensation for help, and there's no way he would betray people the way you had him betray Naruto and the others. Especially not to someone like Fudge.
That's another thing. Fudge is a politician, and I get that a lot of politicians are corrupt, greedy, evil, conniving bastards. And yes, Fudge in the books meets the above description. But in the books, he isn't purely evil, and the way you wrote him out in this makes him seem more like Voldemort than say, a United States Congressman.
I guess what I'm trying to get at here is that for the most part, the story was a good read, and you wrote the Shinobi really well. BUT when it came to the wizards, and the wizarding world, you were pretty far off the mark as to how they acted. As a result of that, I don't think that this story is quite as good as it could have been. The first half was really good, and I really enjoyed it, but then the second half kind of fell apart, and I didn't like it as much.
In any case, you're a really good writer, so please, don't let this review stop you. This is meant to be constructive criticism, not a flaming 'you suck' review. The story was still good, the plot was mostly sound, it's just that the character portrayal isn't what it is in the books.
I've gone on too long, so I'll stop here. If this review sounded really, really mean, then I'm sorry, and please keep in mind that I did enjoy most of the story.
Keep Writing, Keep Rocking!

what a fucked up dumbledore bashing ?

this story was awesome, your various opinions on harry potter are true for me and awesome, and you are awesome. There is too much awesome in this one story.

I loved it! Also I loved what you said in that last foot note, sweet :).

Haha! I love seeing the interface of HP and Naruto. The respective skills and philosophy act as a good contrast.

Well... At least it's ended well... Or at least, i guess so...

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When Naruto and Harry had a 'fight', i'm glad Harry the one who apologize first. Well, he should! He the one who started it! I'm glad Naru didn't think to apologize, since that's not his fault. And so Naruto to forgive him after that. ;)

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Made me goes mad at the conflict between Magic world and Ninja world. And about killing the death eater, i agree with Naru-Shika etc. So true that without wand, the children can easly die!

This fic really get my nerve...
But i'm glad that Shikamaru and the co know that Dumbledore is manipulative type!

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Glad to know that Minerva actually 'helped' them. And Luna always know they're nice! Even Hagrid! Three of them my Hero here... :D

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About what Harry think about this:
' Sirius, the only man who truly offered him a family where he could be "just Harry," like he always wanted to be, '
The part of "just Harry" was wrong. Sirius didnot only think Harry as 'Harry', but also 'James'! The movie 5 showed that so...

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Anyway... This is great fic! Awesome and Intense! But cant help to always side on Naruto and the co here... The magic people here makes me uneasy...!

This story was awesome. Love the part with Tsunade.

Best fanfic i read in the past two years. Good job!