Reviews for Weary |
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WriterJC chapter 1 . 7/27/2009 Great job. I really enjoyed this :) |
kdzl chapter 1 . 7/17/2009 Great story! I just found this, and just wanted to say that I found it outstanding! |
stoneagequeen chapter 1 . 6/5/2009 I love this little story; it's good that JJ can be there for Hotch as a good friend, someone to help him in his time of need... What you have written about Hotch having feelings that ran deep was the impression I always get from what I've seen of him. He is a very caring, compassionate, sensitive individual, but he doesn't let this show. Poor Hotch, I'm glad that Dave and JJ are attuned to his needs. I think both of them share a special bond with Hotch. Thanks for sharing this nice fic. |
Rawiya chapter 1 . 6/3/2009 Another beautiful piece. I can see Hotch heading for this after the season finale. Picky stuff: open up the dialogue, every time the speaker changes, start a new paragraph. I think I spotted one missing period. If you're uncertain how to write dialogue, read a favorite book and see how the author does it. Keep writing. :) |