Not what I exspected. Shit went from 0 to 100 real fucking quick.

only one thing WTF

I don't know whether to laugh or cry. I was getting ready for a solid piece of Yui drama in the first chapter, then it seemed like I stumbled onto Gurochan's /lit/ board instead. I feel at once betrayed and satisfied that I have found a k-on fic that isn't just romance... But still doesn't really tell a compelling story.

Speaking of chapters, while chapter length is about as varied as can be, this reads more like a one shot than a 9 chapter extravaganza.

But I always like leaving something positive, as any story good enough for me to actually read is good enough to put down what I liked about it in the first place!

I genuinely thought that it was funny. I particularly liked the Azusa scene. And in a strange bizzaro universe, I even felt a little sorry for Yui and was cheering for her. Reader manipulation is a skill, and even though this was a fairly crappy fic, you at least got me on the side you wanted I think.

Ok, here's another fun ending.

It's kinda sad at first when theres the whole confrontation-thing going on, but then it's like, "alright, parents are next!"

I personally think that the 3rd ending is funnier, but this ones a close second.

Ok, this ending is funny.

I mean, after reading the whole story, its kinda funny to see it like this. It's such a clash of tone, it's funny!

"Alright then, I just killed off my old band, and tortured and slaughtered my replacement. Let's have some cake!"

XD

Lolz. Awesome.

Wow. Dark, dood.

Y'know, in a weird way, the story's interesting. I'm not usually into creepy stories like this, but this one's actually interesting. (Don't particularly enjoy it, but it's interesting.)

"Let's go home, sister. I'll bake you a cake."

...LOL LOL TO DEATH MAN LOOL.

What's in the cake? A human heart?

Hey there!

I really like the main idea of the plot, actually. Most of the stories here are romance-based. Not that this is bad or anything, it's just nice to see something different, specially when it is about something happen-able, you know?

When I read the first chapter I thought it would be something more "palpable", like how would Yui and the Light Music Club's life be after the replacement and how they felt about it instead of some BATSHIT INSANE PVP, but that's also nice.

I do think that Yui would be at least a little seriously disturbed if she was kicked out.

wow...kinda weird..Yangire-Yui..WOW but i liked it..how come nodoka and ui both hav guns _

Well, that was different. Certainly not what i was expecting from a "K-On" fic but... i won't say i liked it becaused i didn't, sorry. But it was interesting.

Fact is, i would have loved it had it been a "Higurashi no naku koro ni" fic. Only reason i hate it is because it's K-On.

Okay, a couple of things...

Why why WHY is this under General? This is the last thing you'd ever expect to happen in a normal day for the girls.

Yui is actually one of the main reasons that Azusa even joined the band, so I don't know that she'd want to sabotage or replace her, or let anyone else do so.

I could actually see Ui helping Yui do something like this, but she should've been the very first person to know, not the last.

Your chapters are VERY short. You could've easily cut the number in half by combining two or three of them.

I have to admit I did appreciate the multiple endings, but I doubt you'll get many positive reactions to most of the girls being killed so violently by someone who doesn't strike me as being violent at all.

She's not lazy; she's crazy, heh.

Well. Not badly written, actually. In fact, in some weird way, I enjoyed this. Question though, how come all those high school girls are such good shots? :D