I loved it! Great story, not many people write stories from Retsu' point of view. I think the pairing was super cute and fluffy. Thank you for writting it! :)

Hi, me agn as u can c. Since my previous review was like helping no1,i decided 2 give another (not like this will be any betr). I rly with all honestly found nothing wrong with ur fic! Fuck the bastards who cant appreciate an OC Aizen, coz rly nothing cheers me up more then Aizen not being...well Aizen!

ps.i read ur profile, n i knw! How the fuck do u kill a main character and expect ppl 2 except it? Ptolemy's gate made me hate the entire trilogy 4 a while, then i decided 2 js not pay attention 2 canon

I cant put in2 wrds the feeling i got when i read this fic. This pairing is something ive loved 4eva! And u, in a one shot put in all my hopes 4 them. I rly cnt tell u how fantstic this fic made me feel on the inside, i beg of u 2 write another fic with these 2, pls pls pls... I tnk im gna go create an account just so i can fave this, bye

This was truly amazing! I like how you ended with the little child stry time thing, it was funny. I kinda feel bad for Gin, having to go through all the abuse Aizen put him through.

Nicely written! I've seen alot of storys on here where i have to wonder if the person could even spell their own name, so i was happy to read this and see that it was both easy to read and enjoyable and easy to envision.

Keep up the good work. I'm gonna go ahead and check out your other stories. I'm interested in your imagination. :)

Okay, I'll admit the only reason I clicked this was cause you promised some HitsuHina XD

And because AizenxRetsu seemed quite an interesting pairing to dabble in.

I enjoyed it until the part where she confronts Aizen in Hueco Mundo.

I mean, don't take this the wrong way, I get that this is supposed to be romance, but I couldn't help but feel that it would have made an excellent tragedy story. Your portrayal of Gin as trusting Unohana completely was excellent, and very believable.

I think what killed it (well, not killed it, but I can't think of a better word) was the fact that Aizen gave in so easily. If let's say he would have clashed swords with Unohana, and while they were fighting, she would have told him that he had all the power he desired back in SS, it would have made it much more believable, and less OOC. Also, you portrayed Unohana as too gentle when confronting Aizen. I mean, you had her slap him, but really, I can't imagine Aizen letting her get close enough to him (meaning, he's on his throne on the dais, and she's standing before him) to have any physical contact.

If she was a bit more ticked off, a bit more vengeful, that would've been fine. Unohana does have her scary moments XD

Though, I do have to say, the part from when he wakes up and on was quite hilarious. I particularly loved the humor in the ending. (Storyteller Aizen FTW!)

Anyway, overall I'd rate this fic 5/10. The beginning was really amazing and well written, it's just the whole 'Unohana convincing Aizen to repent his ways' was rather...well, botched up, to be honest.

Sorry if my criticism is coming off as harsh, I really don't mean for it to sound that way. And please don't take this as discouragement, please, keep writing more fics, practice makes perfect, after all

~Téa