Uh you realized that Victoria and the newborns died in eclipse and this is on breaking dawn

Wow, they couldn't even wait the short time it would take for her to annul her marriage!? And they don't even talk about it, just jump straight into the physical? No thanks, I won't be finishing this. Totally disrespectful to Edward and the whole family. Really sounds more like lust than love to me, because love doesn't require treating others like dirt. Sorry.

Umm, not sure why Bella was rhyming pretty much the entire chapter, but okay, lol :) It really feels like you were listening to rap while writing this particular chapter and it poured over into your writing. Other than that, the story is decent so far. I usually don't review until the end, but had to tell you this chapter felt like a rap song, lol :)

LOVE what you did! Most people would never twist the story that much but i luve you for doing that

Sorry.. this chapter was a little lame.. Charlisle? lol I really hope this wasnt serious

Way to put a lily allen song in there.. i caught that lol..

Though I enjoyed this story, I did, I thought it was too rushed. Meaning, Emmett & Bella falling in love... taking practically no time at all, it seemed, to grieve their previous loves, especially Bella. During the honeymoon, even on the plane ride home, she was in love with Edward. Then, within hours, she is yelling at him and breaking up with him, or rather, taking a break... not much of one apparently since she was bedding Emmett within the hour.

I think it would have been better to have a chapter or two of Emmett and Bella getting closer and declaring their feelings instead of the suddenness of their getting together.

To the likes...
I was right there with Bella when Edward denied her on her honeymoon. How horrible to be denied by your own husband, talk about feeling unwanted and undesirable.
I wanted to rip Rosalie's hair out for how she treated Emmett and then Bella. What a witch.
It was interesting to see Emmett and Bella get an offspring, despite the impossibility of it. Though I would like to know Carlisle's explanation as to how it was possible.
I can't help wondering how Charlie fits into everything that happened and what happened to the vampire world without the Volturi.
Bella asked for a lifetime of torture by allowing Alice open range to treat her like her own personal doll... YIKES!

It was a fun, interesting story. Thank you for sharing. :D

no this was a very good story and i enjoyed reading it thank you for sharing a nice story so did everyone in that coven make up and what not.

oh wow i wonder what had happened to Bella on how she got pregnant being a vampire wow now Bella is completed and what happened to Edward and Bella and Emmett did they forgive each other and made up as friends again or as brother and sister

ooh they got a fish but for whom and what not. They actually killed the Volturri wow i hope that they do get Craig for what he did to Bella isn't good and for what Rosalie did to Bella was the worst to her with all the bruises and the cuts and what not right. So there for Rosalie got killed by her ex family so know i wonder what is going to happen with Edward and Bella since she isn't in love with Edward but in love with Emmett.

Wow Edward can't you think and see that you did this for not treating Bella as a equal and you should think about it. Edward shouldn't be mad at his brother either if he can forgive Bella why can't he forgive Emmett, and Edward will have to forgive himself also right.

oh no this isn't good at all i can't believe that Rosalie blames Bella for everything and beat her for it why didn't she just kill her like she wants to. Quit the torture and just do what Rosalie wants to do to Bella and that is to kill her doesn't know that Emmett and Bella are mates now does she. This isn't good i wonder if Emmett will find her or will Emmett call Alice for help.

I wonder who it was and who is that Bella she thought she knew i hope they don't hurt her or anything right.

this is sad but kind of silly for Edward to blame Jasper once again for the anger that Edward felt and tore the living room apart, that isn't good at all. In a way Edward had a helping hand in this himself. For not loving Bella enough and not trusting her and everything else that he had made Bella feel. But still she needs a divorce and get Edward to sign the paper in order for Emmett and Bella to get married.

oh wow doesn't Bella have to get a divorce before she can marry Emmett. And what is the rest of the family going to say and do.