This is so beautifully written. Padme SKYWALKER, Anakin would definitely love the sound of that.

Oof! That response from Luke has got to be a kick in the gut. I hope he’ll warm up to Ani quick. Poor Ani. And now Naboo has been destroyed. Damn. Please tell me you haven’t given up on this!

Please update this! I’ve reread these chapters so many times over the years and I am just dying to know how this story will unfold and end.

Could you write a smutty dark Vaderdala fic? There aren’t many of vader and Padme. He can be suitless or with the suit. Maybe something of her running from him and him catching her? ;)

This story is great. I’ve read some nasty comments down below, and please ignore them. It’s one thing for someone to provide constructive criticism, another for someone to just shit all over another’s writing without reason. It’s just bullying. Part of the reason I’ll probably never publish anything, but since I find your writing very interesting and eloquent; perhaps in a way it’s a relief to know these people know nothing, and will bully anyone regardless of how good their story is. If someone is going to insult one of your stories like that then they will insult anyone.

I would love to see an update! If the inspiration for this story ever spontaneously ignites in your mind just know we are here, and we support you. Again, with the comments, “If YoU Can uPDate OthErs Why caNt you Do tHiS One?” many of us understand FanFiction is a release, an enjoyable pastime. And we only write when we have the energy, Ideas, and motivation. Though I do love this one, I understand if it no longer brings you joy to write it. That’s a perfectly valid reason to leave it on hiatus.

Thanks for all the time and effort you put into your writing, I sincerely appreciate it. I always get exited when I see an update/new story from you!

I totally love this fic since you first posted it. I hope you come back to finish it. I can only imagine what Anakin was thiking at Luke's words "Who's Caid?" and also, was Caid on Naboo when the Empire attacked it? If Anakin's jealousy were Rush Clovis is any indication, i'd dread him ever meeting Caid.

I hope you continue with this OH so great story. So much emotions I'm on edge.

Please continue this

I hope you are able to finish this story soon... It's an excellent story and you are an amazing writer.

You actually made me cry with this story and then you just stopped it. I get the feeling you aren't coming back to it. P.S, no, contrary to another reviewer's post Anakin does not need to do a tit for tat on Padme for her relationship with Caid. It makes almost no sense to have his character go there, it's not who he is.

Based on the OT, I feel like Luke and Leia's reactions to Anakin are mixed up. Luke was willing to forgive him and went as far as trying to save him. Def like his father for sure (and it annoys me when people say otherwise and compare him to Padme, completely ignoring the similarities), but I feel Luke's reaction would be your Leia's and Leia's reaction wouldn't exactly be as harsh, but def more weary than Luke.

interesting story

it is a nice take on the starwars theme

when i started reading It got me thinking of what if it was ani's clone that was put in the suit by obiwon while ani was still frozen in carbonite and what would happen if he was somehow released from the carbonite at the start of new hope.

a pity this story hasn't been updated in such a long time

more please if possible

So you can right 83 books but can't update this book!?

Very well written and emotionally wrenching story. I was truly drawn into the characters and the plot. I hope you finish this story. It is fantastic.

I'm an English Lit student, and therefore surrounded by brilliant stories and writers every day, and I can honestly say this is one of the most well plotted, beautifully written pieces I've ever read. You have the gift of writing, and I would love to one day buy something of your creation. But while that day does not come I would be very pleased to see this story through. Please consider finishing it.
All the best for you