Reviews for Tense |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! Good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ..huh |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think you read my mind with the Sasuke was really on a mission thing... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! You're a genius! |
![]() ![]() ![]() the story was totaly okay with out the in these situations and oneshots the lemon is the key to success, but not in this i have never read a ff where sasuke somkes like in some high school bad boy and all beside that not at . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome! I will love sequel :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was seriously sexy. I love it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() more!we need lemon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahaha, awesome story, but should a medic really be smoking a cigarette? lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() ic! it was naruto who let him in lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lmao! The whole story was good but the ending was priceless lol great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG that was awesome but the kitchen part was so sexy me being a smoker too it was awesome i loved it please make more storys like that :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol! please make another one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Personally I think smoking is a turn off... NOT sexy at all. But over all i liked how the story turned out to be. At the end though gave me some sort of impression both men planned. Nice though v |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the tention and wht not even though it seems to be a bit rushed. why the hell would you make te nurses boy a smoker? not even right! sides that i like it. hope to see more of your work... lol... ~soulless~ |