Reviews for Tense
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 10/21/2018
Awesome! Good work!
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 1 . 9/29/2012
..huh
KaitlyntheBrave chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
I think you read my mind with the Sasuke was really on a mission thing...
Neko the kawatta cat chapter 1 . 4/2/2010
Love it! You're a genius!
fanffic reader chapter 1 . 8/16/2009
the story was totaly okay with out the in these situations and oneshots the lemon is the key to success, but not in this i have never read a ff where sasuke somkes like in some high school bad boy and all beside that not at .
Lynartz chapter 1 . 6/20/2009
Awesome! I will love sequel :D
see you another day chapter 1 . 6/19/2009
This was seriously sexy. I love it.
Writing-OnMy-HeartStrings chapter 1 . 6/14/2009
more!we need lemon!
UchihaSakura4 chapter 1 . 6/8/2009
hahaha, awesome story, but should a medic really be smoking a cigarette? lol
zenbon zakura chapter 1 . 6/7/2009
ic!

it was naruto who let him in lol
SAILORMERCY chapter 1 . 6/6/2009
Lmao! The whole story was good but the ending was priceless lol great job
FuryanWarrior chapter 1 . 6/4/2009
OMG that was awesome but the kitchen part was so sexy me being a smoker too it was awesome i loved it please make more storys like that :D
The Angel Of Ruin chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
lol! please make another one!
Shinrin-kun chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Personally I think smoking is a turn off...

NOT sexy at all.

But over all i liked how the story turned out to be. At the end though gave me some sort of impression both men planned.

Nice though v
rain-of-the-soul chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
i like the tention and wht not even though it seems to be a bit rushed. why the hell would you make te nurses boy a smoker? not even right! sides that i like it. hope to see more of your work... lol...

~soulless~
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