One of my favorite fics on this site. The wording and phrasing definitely defines your own style of writing and I can feel all the emotions that characters are portraying. You make it seem so real! Sometimes you have to really search to find a fic with both a great plot and great writing, but in this case, the search was well worth it.

Holy crap. What a ride. I feel like if this girl hadn't been absolutely insane, I could relate. But then I guess I still can since I know the boys better than my actual family. (Note: I swear I'm not gonna kidnap them. I understand they are fictional.) I simply couldn't put this story down...my heart was wanting to beat outta my chest. And you wrapped it up so so perfectly. Thank you so much for writing!

I can't believe it has been over two years since someone left a review. This is such a good story and it's recced on so many lists that I'm pretty sure bunches of people have read it between now and May, 2014. I don't understand why people have stopped commenting, and not just here but everywhere in "fanfictiondom."

Poor, poor Dean. Alex...Alice was truly frightening and your descriptions of how utterly unbalanced she was were chilling. Thank you so much for sharing.

Just found and read this. You have an excellent writing style, everything flows well and is easy to read because of it. You don't seem to have spent hours pouring over a thesaurus looking for megawords, but niether does it dumb itself down. Good descriptive passages and you've managed the stick with the series characterisation of the two brothers which I really liked.
Well done, really good fic :D
Hugs,
Chick xx

I'm intrigued, excellent story so far!

love it

I loved this story! It was a very original idea and it was extremely well written. Sometimes it happens that one piece is enough for you to know someone's one of the best authors there are. This was the case with this story, I'm your fan now (the normal kind of fan, don't worry ;) ) and I can't wait to read your other stories!

"Chuck and his motherfucking full frontal prose."

Loved this!

“Now sex… sex was Dean's food for the soul. His greasy burgers for the ego, the ones that tasted wonderful going down but that, in the grand scheme of things, left his notion of self-worth and value clothed with fat and cholesterol.”

I loved this metaphor! And the juxtaposition of your images to what “food for the soul” usually means
is perfect. Love your writing It’s intelligent and fun and well written.

This was an excellent story. Making the crazed fan VERY crazy made the Dean's sufferng extemely scary. Becky Rosen is just a little overzealous not really dangerous.

Now THAT'S what I call a story. LOL. This was absolutely enjoyable from beginning to end. And yes. I am actually slightly ashamed and red-faced, haha. Poor Dean. You, er...I mean, Alice, treated him absolutely abominably! And I was NOT amused (worried-yes, concerned-absolutely, ever so slightly titillated-ok, sue me-but NEVER amused!) ;)

Seriously, this was quite a ride, and I appreciate all the hard work that went into it. Thank you so much for writing it and allowing me to read it. Best wishes.

hi I just discovered your work. Excellent imagery and characterization. Im kinda jealous ;-) Anyway I know u wrote this a while back but Im a big believer in submitting reviews. Im on my Kindle so pls excuse my grammer. These things werent really meant for typing. Ill def be reading more of your stories. BTW love how u wrote the excerpts from Chucks books. I can imagine that wld be how theyd read.

Loved this! Excellent idea, well done, good style, great original female character! God, Alice gave me the creeps! She is scary! I really liked that she made up for her lack of body strength and fighting skills through brains and meticulous planning. To me it made absolute sense that dean or Sam could actually be trapped by someone like her. I loved the scene where she tried to take care of deans shoulder but was actually torturing him. Oh, and poor Slice! I hope he went to doggie-heaven after everything Alice must have put him through :-) great! Awesome! Loved this! And I wish I could read more adventures of Alice, the fan from hell.

Wow great! D

I was so scared with that crazy girl ahhaa She's the worst kind of monster I can imagine!

Still, about what they said in the end, I'm one of those fans that love to see them bloodied ahha But I wouldn't ever harm this great guys for real! )

I loved the story, really D

See you around o/

Rosetta

I really really liked this story! It was really well written, excellently thought out, it had tons of backstory/ character building to it and was just generally awesome.

Great work! :)