Yes, yes, yes, very impressive. You write this painfully well and just know that - sure, you don't want to own up to this story, I can't blame you - but it's still a beautifully done story. I hope the thing you are ashamed of is NOT the WAY you write. Because it's beautiful.

Thank you for posting this story!

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Technically this should be M but I don't care! I love Leo and Raph together! I don't care who's on top or who's on bottom, they are just so good together! ;)

I really hope you will write more like this!

Lovely and darkish. It really makes you think about the Relationship between Leo and Raph. I like how you portray Leo as not fully understanding it either and longing for that deeper meaning behind it.

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so full of emotion. I loved it. :3

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So sexy!

loved it. :3

Nice, very moving and powerful.

This story is so vivid and amazing. I love the images you use, the way you made leonardo the selfish one for once. I'm not usually a fan of brother pairings, but it's just so beautifully written. I love it.

I pay little to no attention to the boards anymore, but I know I've seen you around, if only for a second, but I felt this fiery urgent need to review this.

Firstly, I have to say HOLYCRAPYOUDOLEOGOOD. I cannot do Leonardo, I simply cannot. I've never been able to 'grasp' him as a character and I think you've done it magnificently. You've managed to take someone like Leo, and make everything going on around him looked him in his own way of thinking.

I've never been great at imagry, either, but that's another thing I really liked in this. It was simple and bare where it needed to be, and expressive in other places.

It really takes you to a different level of the cest-factor, beyond the 'we know it's wrong' deal into the realm of 'we probably won't ever stop'.

And you also managed to keep Raphael submissive without putting him into an awkward, out of character situation. Normally with LeoxRaph pairing, one is always extremtly violent towards the other and both fight for dominence.

My brain is currently melting into a puddle on my desk because I'm so tired, but I just had to tell you what a fantastic job you did. I really enjoyed this, am favoriting it, and will look into more of your work in the near future.

You've written three fics, three oneshots and that's all I need to be able to put you right up there in my 'favourite authors' list. 3 Even burned out and working through a block your work gives me the most wonderful chills, it's just that beautiful. Leo/Raph is such a rare pairing (and my OTP!) and the way you write them ... It works so well. It's funny how Leo feels like he's the one taking rather than giving, when normally it's the sub who is considered to be that role - but it really makes sense; especially considering the way Leo thinks. And I do adore your patient, gentle Raph. It seems like everyone else just sees the impulsive, violent side of him when there's so much more to him than that.

Please, never stop writing in this fandom! 3 Just seeing you had posted a new story today was enough to get my inner fangirl excited. The fandom needs more writers like you.

Omigosh! This is... unexpected. But kind of fun... Please keep it up, what happens when his brothers find out?

Oh wow, first TNMT fic and it was awesome.. so wow. I'm watching the movie right now and I was like hmm, lets check out fic and this was great first pick!