| Reviews for Alarming and Beautiful |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 6/21 this is so beautiful! it perfectly captures how they must've felt. I love it. Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/18/2018 Holy. Cow. So. Good. |
 Broweyesandhair chapter 1 . 11/13/2017 Great story! |
| em38 chapter 1 . 3/16/2017 Absolutely gorgeous writing. |
| loverloverlover chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 This is amazing ! You've got a brilliant writing style and somehow managed to incorporate so may different concepts in a 4k word one-shot. Brilliant. Really truly brilliant :) Keep writing and stay safe ! :) |
| Akamarackus chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 Oh gosh... this is so beautiful and tragic... I can't express it... |
| messrs marauders chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 you have an incredible writing style |
| messy-haired-marauder chapter 1 . 11/13/2014 That was really we written, and I really enjoyed it! The only thing is that you switch from past tense to present tense towards the end. Not sure if it was intentional or... Still a very emotive fic though! |
| Adeline Carter chapter 1 . 8/10/2014 This is absolutely beautiful! You're a fantastic writer and the way that you describe Lily and James is pure and raw and how true love is supposed to be. I like how you don't go into too much detail about their...well, sex life. I mean, you write about it, and it isn't ignored, but you write more about the emotions of it than details, which I think is so important to grasp; we're meant to feel their love and passion and connection, and you can display this without including lots of mature details. Thank you for this. |
| perseusandromeda chapter 1 . 1/27/2014 Brilliant! |
| die-for-a-dream chapter 1 . 4/29/2013 ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL. It's been a while since i read a short story with this kind of quality. Amazing! |
| hapnaps chapter 1 . 3/21/2013 that was heart achingly beautiful! I would write more but im tired and I've been slacking off for hours reading jily fics and then remembering your fic from when I read it a week ago, but not remembering the title, and trying to find it again. but alas it was all worth it ;) |
| Manoella Nascimento chapter 1 . 1/24/2013 This is a beautiful story. Just love your James - it seems to me that he was that kind of person - who holds everything together, but needs someone to hold him together, too. Very well written and touching. |
| papercranesandplanes chapter 1 . 1/10/2013 This is so beautiful. I love your portrayal of James, the way he worries about his friends and Lily and feels like it's all just too much. I really think he would feel that way and the war was probably one of the reasons that made him stop acting like an idiot and bullying and pranking people. War does that to you. It changes you,makes you grow up sooner... And this wasn't smut,it was so realistic and filled with love and... Great job. |
| CeruleanDreamCat chapter 1 . 12/24/2012 That was gorgeous. |
