I saw the first ST:JJA movie when it came out and I REALLY didn't like it one bit. My declaration is very unfair to you and for that I apologize. I would imagine that when it comes to anything ST-related there will always be people that will say "I hate such-&-such part." I guess it's only natural being as the ENTIRE Trek-universe has to be bent, twisted, and squeezed in order wring out something new (or at least new-ish). "New this Fall-Star Trek 100,000 B.C. Yes, we're THAT desperate!" The fan fic writers and the fan film makers have worked extremely hard to keep ST alive during some very dark times, and it has gotten darker. My problem is that I was younger than my grandchild is now when TOS debuted and that will always be the "real" version. Heck, even ST:Animated is more real to me than JJA. I do congratulate you for doing something I can't, giving ST:JJA a fair shake.

Oh my this is a great story please don’t leave us hanging too long live BNN is anywhere near as good as the part I’ve read already I’m just gonna go out on a limb and say wow kudos to you this was a great story

It's been nearly 10 years, and yet... I await the end to this tale. The drama, the suspense... so good and it is killing meeee

Why haven’t you updated in 9 years? This is such an amazing story and you just leave it here? On a cliffhanger? How could you do that to us? Please, please update! I really want to see how the story plays out!

Boom! And you just dropped the mic HERE! REALLY! The bitter, cold side of fanfiction... abandoned stories. Sad.

Ah Ha! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it from the moment the Klingon fired and Chekhov disappeared. Spock really dissed Nyota though, they don't seem to have a strong relationship. Wondering where this will go.

This is a great plot, mystery story worth the next part. Love the ghost part really good.

Where's the rest!? Come back!

Please please continue this story!

Aggh! Such a great story...sad that it was abandomed... dying to know what happens next!

As others have said, this is a great story and I really wish you would come back to finish it. I'm dying to know what happens.

ARGH! I JUST FOUND THIS TODAY! PLEASE CONTINUE THIS! DON'T ABANDON IT! WE ALL NEED THE ENDING!

This is too good not to finish, please continue!

Just discovered this story again after a few years. Still one of the best I've read. Please do not abandon. So rich in emotion and the love between Spock and Nyota is so palpable!
I know it's been years but please continue this story it's too brilliant to leave undone.
Don't leave us alone and hurting with no hope like Spock!

Please finish this story. It's one of the best spuhura stories out here and I know I'm not the only reader who really wants to know how this ends. :-)