Reviews for Release |
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![]() ![]() ![]() a work of art~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! If it has as many reviews as it does with faves it be over a hundred! xD Good job :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. |
![]() ![]() *evil grin* nice |
![]() ![]() ![]() continue please |
![]() ![]() ![]() O/O Oh my god...I think I just fell in love with your story ! Seriously...where to start? First of all I love how you fit so much story into so little words. I've read stories where authors write over several thousand words and still haven't moved things along.. Your grammar... Except for a few places your grammar was a-maz-ing.3 And then there's Naruto. I am SUCH a sucker for a evil Naruto - if he is well written. I loved the whole burning down the village and having sex on the Hokage monument. Please tell me it was on Minato's head! That would just be so...fitting. Over all this has been like a super fudge sundae of a fanfic! The "You wanted a monster and you got one!" was the cherry on top. :) Thanks for writing this ! Birdy |
![]() ![]() Marry me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() lmfao O_O l don't think thats it's good to be laughing at this but...l'm still going to do it! Awesome fic,loved it! love the red panda alchemist |
![]() ![]() ![]() Me: And cut! Great take everyone Kyuubi look at me and raise eyebrows. Naruto: what the hell ur talkin abou onna? (woman) Me: u mean.. This is real? Kyu&Naru: -WTF expression- Me: oh my Jashin! Awesome..! Soo the villagers died..! Finally, I mean who would want to hurt Kawaii-uke-Naru! -continues rant- Kyuubi: : let's go kit..! This bitch is crazy.. Ooh And let the blame go on her.. -smile deviously- Naruto: -look at his lover then at the crazy chick- Works for me And soo Kyu&Naru left the poor girl continue ranting about .. Whatever.. Who cares..! Me: thtz mean TTTT |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool...naruto give in to the anger and hate... epic.. and kind of hard... with the ...erm...u know... |
![]() ![]() ![]() t-tha-that...was..BEASTLY AWSOMENESS! X3 I LOVED DE WHOLE HAVING SEX(problably ontop of Naru's dad's head) WHILE DE VILLAGE BURNS AND DE HEADS WATCH SCENE! I kno im weird but u dont get thins lik this to offent usually its all fluffyness thn sex nd thn more fluffyness but this was pure evil I LOVEDEDEDEDED IT! GREAT JOB |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely *O* I love the part where Naruto says ,"You wanted a monster... And you got one!" It's perfect. . |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was great! is there going to be a next one? |
![]() ![]() ![]() great chapter please make more |
![]() ![]() ![]() That... was... FREAKING AWESOMEE~! I loved it! Not only is there a lemon, but there's also an insane Naruto, my two favorite things compacted into one awesome one-shot! 3 |