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Dud darien do something to serena for her to be this way

What is wrong with Serena? How can she sleep with other men and be married to darken? He should divorce her.

What happened to Serena and darken to strain there marriage?

please write some more. what happens next.

I know you had more chapters. What happened? It's dariens fault for Serena behaving the way she does because of her suffering. Unless you have changed the story? Update

Interesting start, would like to see more.

Serena really is very skanky! I've never seen her portrayed as such, so it's rather shocking and entertaining. I feel sorry for poor Darien who is aware of all her indiscretions, but can't do anything about it. Diamond is a particularly dangerous guy...I wonder what will happen with him in the picture!

This story is so stupid and dumb, April Fools!

Please update I want to know what happens next haha even thought I had already read the story but I can't wait til the confession chapters... which will be chapters away ... haha... great story as always

Keep it coming.

I'm really intrigued by this story. I never read the original version, so I have nothing to compare to, but I enjoy the storyline and alternations between present-day and flashback. The contrast in the dynamics of Serena and Darien's relationship is heartbreaking, and I'm just dying to know what Darien did to cause their estrangement. Definitely looking forward to the next chapter, and I hope that they reconcile!

I cant really remember how this chapter went before it was revised but I still really like it. You give enough back story and now to really intrigue the reader and keep one on the edge of their seat. I know it will take awhile but cant wait to see the next chapter. It seems like its going to be an awesome story, good job!

This story sounds interesting, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!

You really plan on reuniting Darien and Serena after all of this? I really wouldn't respect Serena's character if she resurrected their 'marriage' or 'love' from the dead after all this. She can move on, forgivng Darien in the process, but getting back together with him? Oh, no!

I do enjoy your stories though, including this one. I really wouldn't like to see them reunited after all this, but I know these are the kind of romantic stories you like to write with Serena and Darien. This Darien is just so freaking horrible!

Please, update!