| Reviews for Fixing Mistakes for the better |
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   Tk Uzamaki chapter 45 . 2/6/2014 Tk Uzamaki |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/20/2013 I could not get through the first chapter. You need to re-do this. Again. You need to learn about proper punctuation. |
| ActualCannibalShiaLeBeof chapter 45 . 5/28/2013 PUT MINE ON THERE! |
| Vocabunny chapter 14 . 11/16/2012 YES finally neji's gone! |
| Danieru chapter 43 . 9/1/2011 Please finish the story, you should end it after sasu and naru's wedding or honeymoon |
| Lilgreyblob chapter 39 . 3/21/2011 Hm.. I feel that the story is too heartwarming if everyone gets turned into a vampire. I was hoping for some SasuNaruSasu vampire lust.. Without everyone else attached along. I kinda wanted the ending to be angst..Oops, my bad. Hahah. One of the good things about this fanfiction is that you can see the improvement in the writing. The corrections and edits..along with your Beta was a good move. :D I took extremely long to read up to this chapter..Huh. |
| Lilgreyblob chapter 3 . 3/9/2011 Whooo~ Starting a new fanfiction!~ Aw, Damn. I wanted it to be Gaara and Naruto. I seem to like said pairing more than Neji and Naruto. Hmm. Can't wait for the Sasunaru! |
| purvy sage chapter 40 . 5/10/2010 Great chapter! It was interesting and moved the plot along very well. Looking forward to more as usual! :-) |
| xenawp532 chapter 40 . 4/10/2010 That was awesome. I love this story and i'm looking forward to reading more. |
| In The Mix chapter 39 . 3/16/2010 Woah I seriously can't wait until we start using real email rather than fanfic to communicate because then it won't be in giant blocks...oh well, live and learn. |
| purvy sage chapter 38 . 2/11/2010 Hi! Long time no review, ne? Sorry about that... I dropped off the face of the planet there for a while. I just read the last three chapters and they were fantastic! Hooray for your superb beta! And hooray for your continued imagination. It's great that Neji got turned... afterall, no story (especially an eternal one) is good without a bit of friction. Heh... an unintentional pun. Anyway, as usual I am looking forward to more! Thank you for keeping up with this story! |
| idkbakabaka chapter 14 . 1/18/2010 If naruto still has strong feelings for sasuke why did he sleep with neji and gaara I was just curious? |
| SasukexKarinxLove chapter 38 . 1/15/2010 great chap! can't wait for more! xD |
| In The Mix chapter 37 . 12/31/2009 Interesting concept combining Naruto and vampires. I must say even though there are a bunch of mistakes, I still like this story and hope you update soon. Work on typographical mistakes...it's Summary not 'summery', also learn the difference between their, they're and there...and where to end sentences, use commas and how to capitalize...it can really change the meaning of what you're trying to say. Side note, great sex scenes, some of the best I've read on facebook by far :) |
| SasukexKarinxLove chapter 37 . 12/31/2009 great chapter! i loved it! can't wait for the next update! x3 |
