| Reviews for After The Mistletoe |
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Guest chapter 4 . 1/26/2013 I thought it was actually a very good story, but at the end I was kinda hoping that Ash would just get over himself and grow up. I mean he's like 13 or 14 now so yeah. He shoukdnt be so immature still. I think that he's old enough to kiss Misty. Plus now Misty is like 15 so it should have happened forever ago. Misty totally loves ash! LOL! |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/4/2012 black widow... not good... |
turle chapter 4 . 9/12/2011 poor Misty, what is she going to do with him. Hopefully and eventually he will grow up. |
turle chapter 3 . 9/12/2011 Stupid Ash! He would get bit by a black widow! |
turle chapter 2 . 9/12/2011 Why isn't Ash answering her? I know he doesn't want to be found but he should at least answer her. |
turle chapter 1 . 9/12/2011 Poor Ash he is so dense. and that poor spider. I wonder how Misty is dealing with this? |
themagebear chapter 1 . 6/16/2010 so aside from the most violent abuse of the ellipse that the magebears ever seen, very good. captured ash perfectly. |
Fallen Dragonfly chapter 4 . 10/9/2007 Heh, very amusing. Shame we didn't see the actual kiss. Or did you have a sequal? |
EVAN AAML chapter 4 . 4/9/2007 Ah, a happy ending, I will look at the sequal, what are the odds, I have a New Years story too! The only difference is that, unlike your Christmas story and New Years story, mine are NOT sequals, my Christmas story is my longest story yet and my New Years story is a one-shot. If you want, look through them. sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML |
EVAN AAML chapter 3 . 4/9/2007 Well this is a bad predicament! I sure hope that Ash feels better, the plot is good, but the fact that Ash is afraid of Misty eating him like the Black Widow did that male spider sort of ruins the romantic moment. sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML |
EVAN AAML chapter 2 . 4/9/2007 Oh, cliffie, I have to read the next chapter and hope that the aaml will soon show, can't wait to see what happens! sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML |
EVAN AAML chapter 1 . 4/9/2007 This is good, I love the spider bit, my brother is arachna-phobic, it's funny. Anyway, great job! Although Ash is older now and he wouldn't act like that anymore, even if it was for Misty under the mistletoe. Anyway, great job! I have a pretty good Christmas story too if I say so myself. sincerely, evan, a fan of aaml -EVAN AAML |
Eric Morecambe chapter 1 . 8/28/2006 That's fantastic. How do you do it? |
Freaked out chapter 3 . 8/4/2005 YOU FREACKED ME OUT WITH THAT! I HAVE ARAKNID-PHOBIA! MY HAND JERKED FROM THE MOUSE WHEN I FELT SOMETHING TICKLE MY HAND! IT WAS THE MOUSE PAD BUT IT STILL FREACKED ME OUT! Great story so far |