The interaction between Squidward and Patrick is HILARIOUS!

Something I just thought about: WHY aren't we able to comment on the same chapter twice, and WHY aren't we able to reply to other people's comments?

That sucks...

AHHHHHH! OMG! When she screamed, "You did this to me!" I got so worried! I was like, "Oh, no! Did he injure her during karate or something?!" BUT THEN I KEPT READING AND REALIZED SHE WAS GIVING BIRTH! OMG! Best. Ending. EVER!

This story was so cute, simple and entertaining! You did a fantastic job, my friend!

AWW! What a cute idea to have him point so that he could pull the ring out haha!

Well... *clears throat* it seems that SpongeBob and Sandy got a little... PERSONAL in this little chapter. *turning red in the face* lol.

I love the little realization Squidward had about Sandy really loving SpongeBob and treating him like a husband! It was really sweet. Also...

"Squidward's just jealous that he never found love." WHOA, Mr. Krabs is a crustaceous savage lmao!

HOLY... Ooooooooohhhh... where are they going with this? LOL.

It's SO typical of Mr. Krabs and Squidward to tease the kid like that... *sigh* poor Spongy, lol.

WHOA! YES! DRUNK SPONGEBOB! Now we're talkin'! Haha, I JUST recently wrote a story all about him getting drunk and... well, you know. ;)

Aww! Yay, they're going to his house! SLUMBER PAR-TAY-HAY! Lol.

LMAOOOOOO! "No way! I want 5% off or no deal." TYPICAL PATRICK LOOOOOOL. XD That was hysterical! AND HAHAHAHA! THAT ENDING! Dude, the way you write Patrick/Squidward comedy is so amazing! God, I'm laughing my butt off!

The Spandy moments in here were also very sweet and touching. This is a very nice and unique story.

This is so sweet and adorable! I loved it when Sandy fell on top of him haha. You really know how to write such cute moments that are so simple yet so heartwarming.

I see you haven't written anything in a long time! Man, this site really needs your stories. I hope you come back someday.

DAAAWWWW! This whole story was SSOO adorable! The story flowed smoothly and everyone was in character: Patrick was stupid (with RARE flashes of intelligence), Mr. Crabs was greedly, Squidward's still hating everyone (while still caring for them, go figure), and the 2 lovebirds interacted realistically without breaking character...

TO MAKE A LONG STORY SHORT-.

TOO LATE!

This story, I like it. ANOTHER!

THISWASSOAWESOME!

Yay, a happy ending! I really like this story, especially chapter 7. So many people portray Spongebob as not knowing what sex is, but you did not, and I thank you for that. Child-like though he may be, I'm sure he must know what sex is.

Anyway, I do so love your Spandy stories. Maybe you could write one that's a little more risque, if you know what I mean? ;3

lol nice story!thanks so muc for the flash back it gave me isperation 4 a new chapter thanks so

much 4 helping me overcime writers block! :D

Awesome

Well, from a quick glance, I can say that this is DEFINATELY better than some of your other stories, so it looks like you had improved dramatically before writing this. This was much longer, higher quality, and the concept is slightly more believeable.

You definately packed in lots of cuteness. You made Spongebob and Sandy have actions that sound kinda reasonable in the real world, and yet didn't stray from their character.

I LOVE that you stopped and had one of those "Meanwhile at the Krusty Krab..." deals. One story keeps the other one fresh and exciting. And the humor, especially the exchanges of words between Patrick and Squidward is classic yet new.

Perphaps a bit too much kissing and physical interaction for my taste, but you did write those parts-and the story as a whole-well. (With the exception of the very first paragraph, which strangely lacked something, although I don't know what exactly.)

The only problem I saw was that you forgot to brake the scene changes, so you KNOW that it's a different scene. You kind of have to guess with that. But really, this is great work, and I liked almost every part of it. Well done.

esta genial tu historia, felicidades! D