I know you're trying to get him to go on a mission, but this is lousy, even by fanfiction standards. The build up was fine, if a bit unrealistic in how they treat people; but this chapter basically wentI want you to go."
"I don't want to go, but even though I don't want to go, I won't fight it when you'll persuade me even though you no longer have any leverage over me."
"but what if we threaten you with legal action that has so many holes in it, you could use it as a metaphorical sieve."
"ok I'll go! haha I actually wanted to go anyway, as shown by my lack of protesting for the sake of the story line."

SO GLAD ITS FINISHED. The amount of abandoned fics out there is devastating. I liked the alternate ending, though if that was the actual ending I would’ve hated you.

THIS FUCKING SUCKS

Amazing book! There was a couple mistakes on the scuba diving chapters which did tickle my brain a bit but apart from that I really liked the originality of the whole plot and how it wasn't a complete reveal cliqué.

EXCUSE ME HOW DARE YOU

TELL ME THERE'S A SEQUEL

Well I still like Akeima...really enjoying the story. Always wanted to read something like this

;-;. Awestruck at the amazingness of this story

You know what I can’t explain how much I love Aikema’s character, everything you’ve done with him is just about perfect. Except now he’s dead

This is probably one of the best alex rider fanfics I’ve read. I loved that you didn’t follow the normal plot. I honestly I have probably only read one or two five that were this good. (Ps. The fact that you finished it is definitely a plus)

Amazing story. Not the usual plot where Alex is revealed as a spy and his schoolmates come to train with SAS, but much better. Congragulations. I really enjoyed reading it. I also love your other stories ;)

I thought this was absolutely amazing! I've probably read it before but it's still really really good and you should keep writing!

this is the best alex rider fanfic i have EVER seen omg pls do more

...Well. Wow. Amazing story. I love Aikema, he was my favourite character. He reminded me a lot of Yassen. And that twist at the end was great! Shame about the whole dying bit of that, though, even though I was kinda expecting it since I read the sequel first. Why can't you have a nice happy ending, with him becoming Alex's guardian and fluffy bonding? But no. Evil author, you had to make it deep (the cuts?! I was so shocked) and bring in gorgeous plot twist with that whole Blunt thing.

I love the kids that Alex befriends, too. I love all your OCs! But Aikema will remain for me a very special creation in the world of Alex Rider, so well done.

The beginning of this chapter terrified me, no fun. Loved the rest though!