I know I've read this before, I'm surprised I didn't review it! I really love this, it's really interesting, I can't wait to read the follow up I saw on your profile, I think I probably read them too. Hmm.. maybe I reviewed one of them. Also, I think this is a tad choppy, as in the lines don't flow together as well as they could, but it really doesn't take much away from the story! great story so far!

I hate suicidal themes, because it is a very personal theme for me, but I truely think that this is beautifully written.

Aw...That was sad...Poor Sweets...

That is so sad to see him internally suffer like that. I can see this issue being something that will appear again.

Wondering if you build into another story from this.

This was a really good heart tugging story - makes you want to see someone help him or see him ask for help, could possible lead to a story of him breaking down.

One of my favorite Characters.