You are Amazing

This was a hell of a story ;) fantastic!

Nice ending!

It really gripped my heart!

hi there,this is very good one..i liked it a lot.. I hopre there will be a sequel of this story.

Another awesome story! Thank you!

You are an amazing writer. It was so incredibly hot the way he just took control. I love when he forced the door open, and the detail of how he closed her door and stripped his clothes off walking back towards the bed. So descriptive and definitely better than how I would picture his actions. He's so effing hot and you made him hotter! I love the detail of your citrus material. You've inspired me!

wuuu *i'm sobbing* yes believe it.

it's very touching 3 love ya for that :)

you really know how to make that lazy nara looks like a complete bastard in the first place.. and i give you a credit for that.. hahahaha99x! xD i enjoy and very pleased in a dark kind of way.. hohoho.. you know, i like the way that you describe shikamaru during whatever event happen on hokage place.. i imagined he looks much, much more manlier for some lazy ass.. hahaha.. no flame... just kidding.. hehehe :) anyway i like your story.. looking forward for some fantasy series from you.. hehehehe.. nice to k0nw you by the way.. :] XD

wow! I'm actually impressed! It was a god damn story! I like it! hakahak (Pervert state)

I liked it...shikamaru's personality was surprisingly straightforward... made me laugh a little at the end cuz I didn't expect Chouji to punch him! Awesome fic

I love this! It was such a great read! And I think you wrote everyone perfectly!

I enjoyed reading the story :) But mind if I berate a little? LOL... No matter how drunk "SHE" is... and no matter how you put her as "someone" who just got drunk and end up doing that with Shika... I still can't get my business out of it, I mean.. I cant stop hating her, much more that in this story, she proved to be a one hellava of a bitch.

P.S the "she" here does not refer to Ino, if you want to find out who... then read it for yourselves and Enjoy.

Thanks for the story.

Amazing Story!:)

;3;

bravo D':

i seem to always cry with joy at the end of your stories x.x

i think their that good ;D

excellentness -w-

~~~Ruri

such an amazing story! iloved it

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