This was a fantastic read well done

Liked the reference to teh future of the series. They were standing on the road where Marissa died later on did they? Anyway. Loved this story, loved this ending. Thanks for sharing.

Cotillion was the word. Ugh! Luke. Things just always seem to be against Ryan at one point or another. He has to catch a break some time.

Awww. Poor little Ryan, and now too. Only two chapters left to read :(

How long have Ryan slept now? Like a week? Aw. Poor thing.

Oh. Kirsten won't be happy if she knows Marissa was there. Oh so that was the cot... now I forgot the word and I'm too lazy to go and check. Reviewing takes too much time when I just want to get on with reading

"An action he had seen preformed but not on him" that just somehow got me. So perfect. In character, for the story, the words- everything. I love this story so much, but there are only a few chapters left

Oh that's no good. And I think I said it before but everything in this story is just perfect. Especially those funny bits in all of this drama. Love it.

All of these relationships are just adorable and perfect. Seth and Ryan as brothers, Sanady and Kirsten, the whole family. And it's just perfect for this story. And your writing so well.

Awww. And she wanted to buy a baby watch? Awwww. Kirsten. The part with Sandy and Seth was so funny and just perfect. Loving it

Cotillion? I don't remember that. But yays anyway. Not that I have much to say because this story was written and finished almost ten years ago but anyway.

Aw. Sethy. So cute. Your writing is really great and you just seem to put everything perfectly where it should be if you get what I mean

Nope. He will not like it. But I'm liking this story. I'm liking it loads and loads. And I'm also starting to run out of ideas about what I should say in reviews

Oh don't worry. Anti-smoking rants are great if you ask me. Anyway, penguin with pink tie bow was it? Awwwww. But Lord his fever must have gone high.

Oh geez. Oh that's no good, no good at all. I love the way you're getting the characters so much like they are in the series. Even the way they talk and the words they ise and everything.