What I liked:
- Characterization: Characters that are fleshed out and remain true to their respective roles.
- Grammar: Done impressively throughout the story.
- Plot: Nicely thought out and executed.

What I didn't like:
- The shortness: Alas, perhaps it was better that it didn't drag on? This could possibly be a plus in disguise.
- No line breaks besides the occasional 'xXxX': Hurt the flow.
What I think could be improved on:
- Line breaks inserted: Would help the flow.

Overall impression:

I think that this was a nicely done crossover, to be honest. The way you incorporated the idea of Hitsuzen into this story was very nice, and I feel like the execution was marvelous. One strength of this fic would be your characterization of all of the characters. I mean, sure. It was a surprise to see Shigure so desperate for Akito to live, but it's understandable given the nature of this story. I think that the flow of this story is interrupted; however, with the use of 'xXxX' in place of line breaks. Perhaps, they would have looked better with a horizontal line break included? That's just my opinion, though. In terms of actual errors, I've found none. You've created a story that I would love to see more of, though.

Please continue one day?
~Fire
PS. In conclusion, excellent story. :)

Sweet. Nice.

I was just pokimg around the site when I found this. I liked it! Kind of inspires me to finally write and post my own fruitsbasket/xxxHolic fic!

Dear Lazy, I did not forget about the rooster. As Yuko said in the story: "But it was an incomplete set because the rooster's spirit had already passed on."

I loved this story, Shigure and Akito's relationship is an interesting one, ne? Just one thing I noticed is that, when you listed out all of the years, you forgot one! The only reason I noticed though was because of 2 reasons. One, it's my birth year, and two, he's my favourite charactor. Can't forget Akitos other love, Kureno, year of the rooster! :D

...TTTT this is sad, and rather bittersweet. But a lovely read. Poor Akito...

short but good but could you elaborate more on the second part of the storytelling?

DO MORE :O it started out really well! do more and make it long please :)

ooh...So what wish was made to use them all? Great fic...and I could see Yuko doing that...though I don't get why Shigure would want to keep the dog...

I like that, but did he end up saving her? Sorry, I couldn't tell. I did think it was very sweet and I liked how Yuuko dealt with the wish. I don't think rest of the Sohma family wouldn't really mind giving up their zodiac spirits. Really cool story though, I loved it.