So a cameo appearance from Tristan I'm in, but seriously this doc is looking good

I may have snorted at the end of the 4th paragraph cause of a certain parade song

AAA yessss! i think having Yami be evil is a great change from the fics I have read so far, it's innovative. and I like the interactions between 'Kura, Ryou and Yuugi 3
let's see how the plot thickens :D

Hahaha Molly Weasley is lovely as always xD so funny!

Waiting for that moment where Yugi challenges some other card-wielding macho man int duel.

I hope you get better. You're an amazing writer.

Ooh never mind okay then bad guy yami

DID YOU JUST KILL OFF TAMI IN THE FIRST CHAPTER! ಥ_ಥ it's well written though good job

Okay, I just thought of someone else who should at least get mentioned: where the bloody hell is Joey?! Yugi's first friend and what he got from his wish on the Millennium Puzzle, the friend who is so loyal that he was willing to sacrifice himself in order to save Yugi.

Honestly, after what happened in the Orichalcos arc, I find it hard to believe that Atem would act like you have described. Yugi, maybe, but most certainly not Atem. However, I am willing to suspend my disbelief in order to enjoy this story.

Are you ever going to update and continue this awesome story?

Update please

I know that this story has not been updated. but, I would still put it in the list of my favorite stories.

i think its safe to say that you're not going to be updating this anymore ;; *cue melodramatic music*
anyways lol i really enjoyed what you've provided for this story, it was very well written and thought out, and i'm sure youve improved in the nearly six year leave from this story, I may just check out your other works ;p
all in all, great work! I look forward to reading more of your stuff!

Wasn't sure if I'd like the story to start with, but it was pretty great and a lot of fun to read! :)