You're really into this story of stuff, aren't you? I'm assuming the General is Obi-Wan, but even if he isn't it, it's still really sad. Poignant and heartfelt - well done! Thanks for writing.

Cheers!

~ Estora ~

The General was doing the right thing in his mind, however, in a few short years the clones would turn on every Jedi, I wonder if he knew that would he offer himself so easily.

Great piece, it is amazing what can be written in the early hours of the morning.

Oh I liked this! Clone-centered fics are always amazing for me to read, and I REALLY liked your Jedi...we need more like him!

~Mir'ika~

nice, I like it