Sorry id this a bell/ Edward story or a Bella/ Jacob?

this was a interesting and good story you wrote and your right you gotta have conflict if you want climax and you gotta have climax if you want a good story. Great to hear that a sequel will be coming out and your story had what any great writer has in a story the effort and mind in the story.

I need a chapter!this is controversial but amazing all the same!

OMG LOVED IT! I'm so sad it's over! ((
Keep writing! Ur really good at it! :)

Love it so far :)

awesome story, i love how they're all so close

Haha I had a teacher named Victoria Parks. I actually liked her.

i truly loved it

thats a great story I really enjoyed it

i have to say i know what you were aming for, and i think if you went back, (even though you dont want to) and had her dream be more clear and then the realization come after she she told charlie. it would flow better like you want. But i am still going to keep reading. and just so you know, i have been looking at stories all day, yours is the 1st that i have read past chapter 1... i want to know what you will have happen next.

great story!

you should mark this complete since it's done...

Ok, finally pushing review. Your Edward is a saint, really, though he did sleep with a taken girl without protection.. ;) James can go to hell and stay there, he's being an ass and no doubt cheating on her aswell, could be easier on Bella though if she caught him.

i really like this story but in the sequel you should not have james in it at all cuz i like them stories sometimes but not everytime. ha ha ha the conflict of the sequel can have somethin to do with jacob

Hi There

I just read your story and I loved it... From Start to end...

U said you were going to do a sequel to this story...

Well what if James escapes from Prison and Plans to Kidnapp Edward & Bella's Baby...

I hope in thisstory that Bella & Edward are living together...

I love it!