Awww... Shiki's jealous! If I were him, I would be too :D How dare another measly guy write such perfect descriptions about Rima? She is only for Shiki and Shiki should be the one who wrote that!

BTW it was a really breathtaking description and story overall :D simple yet romantic! LOVED IT! Keep up the good job!

viva la Shima!

Simple fic, yet oh-so-brilliant! You portrayed Shiki's feeling just right. ] More from you!

I really like this pairing so thank you very much for doing it justice. I hope you write more about these two because I really like how you wrote Shiki.

i like this piece nice

Tis awesome Kay.

Nice to see you have Internet.

Look forward to seeing more writing

:D

Bye bye

aw~ that was soo sweet! n.n

you described rima wonderfully!

you know somehow i really can think that shiki is really possessive ..XD (towards rima) do you?

this is so awesome! you made it so good and great!

FAVORITED!

oh...i think you've described Rima wonderfully and the hint of possesiveness from Senri was nice :D a possesive Senri is always appealing to me X3 very well written! i'm gonna favorite this :)

Aw! I love Shiki and Rima! They're are completely made for each other and they are my favorite pairing in VK! Zero, Yuuki, and Kaname just have too much drama going on around them... This was definitely an enjoyable quick read- anything to get away from the dread of homework- and I don't see too much OOCness within it.

Don't worry about not updating anything lately. I've recently just came out of a 1 1/2 year slump. However, I can sense that slump is lurking around the corner ready to kick all my ideas to the curb and promptly run inspiration over with a semi-truck. And don't get me started on the plot bunnies that try tearing into 9 different directions.

Sorry, I did not mean to go on a tangent like that... but as I said, I'm trying to avoid homework...

It is great to see that you're still alive though! I hope for us both that we won't fall under and off the radar again.

Cute piece you have here!

~Death