WOW! That's about all I can say, bloody ell, this was a epic story.
I'll be putting this gem into my Nuke Proof Bunker.
0))

This is both dark, and beautiful. I enjoyed every minute, I couldn't take my eyes from the screen. It was a captivating puzzle.

I know you’ve moved on to real life authorship (as all of us should try to one day,) but this really does have the bones of a extraordinary longer fic.

A pleasure as always!

Wooooah what an amazing story! I loved how dark and well thought it is! Great job!

That moved me.

That was incredible, it was tantalisingly mysterious and deeply horrified me. The beauty is in the lack of concrete images giving it the qualities of a nightmare. Beautiful and strange.

I really like this story.

Please write a sequel to this. Thank you very much. I really appreciated it and liked it a lot.

Holy moly, bloody awesome story.

:))

I don't think I have understand all in that text but I find it sickly beautiful.

That was... quite depressing, but somehow amazing in the same time. That's why i love this kind of stories. 10/10.

Whoa. this was a rollercoaster ride of madness, sadness and... something deep.

very interesting story, however i am infuriated by the lack of backstory especially since you gave enough history to make a reader realize that we need more to completely understand what is going on. i think this has the potential to be expanded into a story as long as renegade, especially all the years prior to what ever happened to harry before the beginning of the story. i will say that you have a knack for this genre and do it very artfully.

This was an intense read! A bit bizzare but quite interesting.

Bravo!