Continúa está increíble la trama

Well, I don't see the use of Meiton Kuro Senbon. To create senbon, wind or ice would be better no ? It's something else if the senbon have a added effect (honestly, I half expected the tree to wither at the contact of the senbon), but if it doesn't, it doesn't make Meiton justice.

I give up. It seems you will continue to use this word...

Well, like I said in the precedent chapter, your use of the 'thus' word is too conspicuous.

The story aside, you use the word 'thus' way too many times. It's a word so rarely used that it's impossible to miss it. I just hope it was just for this chapter...

Great job I hope you do continue

very good story, I hope you continue soon, I think that for the battle of Hiruzen vs Danzou, Sasuke is helping Hiruzen, that way you do not lose the cannonical thing altogether, something else, that I would like to know at least, is how or if you will use senjutsu to naruto, also if it is your mistake (or not) because in the chapters where naruto is nominated by Jiraiya to Jounin, Uzumaki calls him and not Sarutobi, that would be all, greetings, as I have expressed before, I love your stories, it's the second I read, NaruHana being the first, a greeting, congratulations, bye!

Very well written (enjoyed all of the chapters).
The cliff-hangers was guaranteed to keep you checking for the next update.
Would be nice to have the next update.

How utterly cliche. A character with a dark power that is affected by their mood. How is that any different from the kyuubi's power. Super fast and unnecessary personality change.

why are his eyes green?

IF HE HAS NO TEAR DUCTS HOW ARE HIS EYES NOT CONSTANTLY DRYING OUT

Place him in an orphanage? why kind of hair-brained IDIOT idea is that?.. That's COMPLETELY STUPID.. At least this way, THEY HAVE to care for him! Where the HELL are all minanto's "FRIENDS"?.. The type of people that wouldn't give a TOSS what the "moron hokage" said! Some "beloved" ruler when everyone ABANDONS his kid! SCREW what he's thinking of them in the afterlife, HOW DO THEY LIVE WITH THEMSELVES?!(and yeah they are ALL most CERTAINTY GOING TO HELL) AND you think it's NOT going to make an IMPRESSION ON HIS KID? How is he gonna trust ANYBODY if he KNOWS the second he's out of the picture you'll DITCH everything you profess? CRAP IDEA all the way around! (not the story, CANON!).. It doesn't make ANY SENSE! Whatever the "plan" was, it SUCKED at the jump!

Naruto is a wimp

I hope you will update this story again, any who i hope Hiruzen will survive his battle with danzou can't wait to read more.

Naruto on team 8 story are boring why not just team 7 or a team of oc's

Are you going to finish this story?

One of the best story i readed on this site. Wow perevert as hokage hahahaha great move, i screamed into heavens how hehehe. cant wait for the next chapter.