well written. I do hope Light gets better though, but bumps on the road is expected

Wow... L is both an ass and somewhat oblivious

Well, even though this story hasn't been updated in years, I'm going to add a couple of comments. First off, this is a very good approach to anorexia. I'm impressed by the maturity of it. However, you do have both Light's weight and L's weight wrong; Light is 119 pounds, and L is 110. Both are already underweight by BMI class. 126 pounds is also not really enough to be as thin as you are describing Light. Therefore, I would suggest Light weighing about 100 pounds.

I loved it.

Pretty good so far! :)

I insist that you update. I have been waiting quite some time for a new chapter. You must not keep me waiting. It is not very nice. I would very much like a new chapter. The way you present L and Light is spot on and I can only ask for more. I am posting my review on this chapter because I have already reviewed on the one after this and the last one. UPDATE. I am still waiting.

I really like this story and enjoy your character portrayal and the complex relationship you're building between Ryuzaki and Light.
Only criticism is that Light seems way too open about his eating issues, and some of the things he is publicly saying and doing just doesn't fit with the usually very secretive nature of a person with an eating disorder.
Please update soon, I'm interested in where this fic will go in future chapters

WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE THIS? Yeah, sorry I don't mean to yell, but seriously. It says this story was last update 2 YEARS AGO. I've been waiting for this story to be updated again for 2 years! I don't like it when wonderful stories rot because they are never again updated. What's the point of posting it for others to read if you don't finish it. I just don't get it!

Now that I'm done ranting I think this is a really good story - obviously. I don't think Light is done with his insecurities and well develop further into his anorexic tendencies. I would like to see that; one of the reasons why I decided to read this story to begin with.

In any case, please continue or at least give some time of feedback of what is taking you so long!

Aw, the fluffiness. :D

Again, I say, poor Light. It's so damn obvious that he's delusional. But he's delusional over being delusional. ...I'm delusionioned. xD

Update! :D

Poor Light. Ryuzaki, you idiot.

I love this story. :D

Ryuzaki, you idiot. *facepalm*

At least Misa tried to be of average intelligence... Epic fail, though.

I really, really hope you update this story (even though it's been 2 years). It is written very well and has a lot of great elements. Please don't abandon this story to the graveyard!

read this :-) now I'm incredibly sad. L is an asshole and thought he doesn't notice it, he's obviously taking advantage of the mental state that he put Light in. So I'm frustrated. But you've written this very well and I do hope that you continue because this, although depressing, is really very sweet. :-(

I hope things get better. Everyone's always complaining about Lights arrogance but at this point I almost wish he had it back so that he would be able to pull himself together.

So I hope this has a happy ending! In short, I love it! Keep writing please!

I must say that what I like most about this story is that anyone could relate to it. It's so easy to follow, yet it's complicated and psychological. It's also not one hard blow but many jabs that cut through unnoticably, and I absolutley love it! YOu're doing a wonderful job writing too, it's very colourful. xoxo

I think this is a really great story! I love it! However, I'm curious as to why L hasn't considered that Light may be anorexic? Light's displaying many of the common symptoms of anorexia, and L would obviously know that Light is unable to control something like that. Also, is Light going to continue on this stint? I should hope so, as things like that aren't cured in just a few words or with a few actions. If he does, and he does more research on diet and exercise, I just want to suggest you might look into pro-ana? It stands for pro-anorexia, which, if you research it a bit, you'll find is a lifestyle choice and not something that just supports the whole idea of anorexia. I don't know if it's too late to incorporate it into this story, but for future reference at least you should look into it. At the least it may give you some ideas for what to do with Light. Also, maybe you could have a more solid reason behind Light's thoughts and actions? For instance, a traumatic childhood experience that either he or someone else experienced (like merciless bullying or something)? I dunno, it would be interesting. But anyways, keep up the great work and I hope you update soon!