Reviews for The Fear Within
GrizzlyBear5704 chapter 12 . 7/12/2017
Is Boris' ghost hanging around?
SpringRolls chapter 18 . 1/21/2017
The words that your stories contain are good but i cannot say the same about the plots
Guest chapter 18 . 6/6/2016
If vega isn't just goin through a phase to end up with viola I'll probably stop reading nothing against gays but not exactly what I look for in stories
Mr A. Nonymous chapter 6 . 4/14/2016
Really?

"And less sc- less scrawny?!" Vega crowed, turning to glare at Viola. "Oh, you're a fine one to talk!"

And what's that supposed to mean?" Asked Viola.

"Just what you think it does, you ostrich!"

"Ostrich?! Oh, I'll ostrich you Potter!

"You'll ostrich me? What does the even me-OUCH,"

Could you put in more Tonks jokes please? There're not enough now that Hrry and Tonks are all grown up.
Beth5572 chapter 18 . 4/2/2011
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
JM0RIARTY chapter 15 . 1/31/2011
well since you obviously couldnt pair Harry with some guy, your gonna pair his son Vega with Dracos son or Lapis or someone else?

so there are other boggarts or monsters around in Hogwarts, Veras year one isnt gonna be boring, he?
JM0RIARTY chapter 12 . 1/31/2011
well with the hint with Iscariot... someones gonna be a vampier, it wont be Lapis, I think because that would be way to easy... well somethings bothering me... why is Vega afraid of Hyde? or is it that is afraid of being attact by Hyde? really curious about that boggart lessons, about the boggart, I discarged that idea as being way too easy, while reading...

but then you made the gauntlet evil and mean, as was Tommy diary... both being objects that could think without a obvious brain, so they must be evil by HarryPotterUniversLaw, must'nt they?
JM0RIARTY chapter 10 . 1/31/2011
your very mean you know... first you raise my hopes Leons still alive... ever since Vega (well thats a meany too... how could let Tonks name their son Vega... still thinking about lasvegas every time I read that name)asked about the female guest, I was thinking Luna, turns out ive been right... and then you go and let Leon still being dead! damn...:P

mondy
Ams7eL chapter 15 . 1/22/2011
I'm not that big of a fan of this 'book', but I like how you actually made the entire R series where most people would have given up and quit... Having said that and a few of your stories have been tied to that series in some way I suggest a time travel story! I think it could be badass escpecially with your characters and 'your' Harry... You had the option - Harry go crazy, Harry not go crazy, what about Harry go back in time? Just and idea ].
Beth5572 chapter 14 . 12/6/2010
I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri
jesi ki kage chapter 13 . 11/26/2010
aww! that's great! go vivi. poor Lapis. can't wait to see what their fears are! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
jesi ki kage chapter 12 . 10/29/2010
nice! totally wasn't expecting that. really makes one curious about Hydrus now too. sorry for delay. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND UPDATE AGAIN SOON!
Pierced From Within chapter 6 . 9/21/2010
If I recall correctly Tonks,I believe,said she felt something in the pit...Or was it someone else?However that fact has me really interested.I can only wonder what it is,and I have my ideas...Which are most likely all wrong,lol.

Something else that's also taken my interest,and I'm sure it's the same with wondering what the hell Tonks meant at the end of Gauntlent about something going "terribly wrong".Hopefully you chose to reveal it soon,as it has me constantly thinking about it,and I'm not very patient,lol.

Great story,it's all I've been doing when I'm not in school,have football practice,and whatnot.
Altaire chapter 12 . 9/15/2010
Hey, I've been following your series since your computer crashed during Citadel, and I haven't even read the new chapter yet but I saw the title and instantly thought, is the monster a boggart? It seems kind of your style to do something unexpected like that.

-Altaire
pendragon36 chapter 12 . 9/13/2010
this might seem like an odd question but, is Vega a homosexual or is he going to be one? for some reason I get the feeling that he is.
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