Reviews for Something in the Water
Elisa chapter 14 . 10/6/2018
It's great. I always wanted a fic where they ventured out into space together (for what ever reason) and this is awesome. Characters spot on, story entertaining, awesome writing. Update soon, yeh?
Guest chapter 14 . 9/30/2018
I NEED AN UPDAAAATE PLEASE :'(
Ematiger chapter 14 . 8/7/2018
I read this story years ago and once again I stumbled upon it just now in my fav list and... I read it again in one go. This story brought back the nostalgia of this ship and fandom I have abandoned. I usually don't like lemon in fics, but things here were described so nicely, without any force (that's not what Bulma would say, but...). This story has humor, drama, no Yamcha and some cute moments between those two - all of those things I love. I definitely don't regret spending a few hours re-reading this fic. I loved this story years ago and my love for this fic only grew as I read it again today! Thank you for nice memories and sweet nostalgia!
Jinnette chapter 14 . 10/6/2017
This is such a cute story it is a shame it looks like it has been abandoned and forgotten...I enjoyed reading would like to see it finished.
Bella Kuran 1 chapter 14 . 10/1/2017
Wow ! Es increible! Eres increible! Esta historia me tiene enganchada, acabo de leerla toda de un tiron y me encanta! Muchas gracias por compartir tu genialidad con nosotros, por favor no la olvides y terminala!
Meagan chapter 14 . 7/25/2017
By far the best fanfic I have read of my two favorite characters...EVER! And I have read so many. I applaud you. Many hope there will be more to come. You play the two very on point. Good job. Keep it up!
Guest chapter 14 . 1/31/2017
Please update soon, I really want to see where their relationship goes!
ZeroImagination chapter 14 . 1/14/2017
Thanks for a great story! I must admit that the summary about arousing chemicals in the water sounded so ludicrous that I avoided reading this for a long time. BUT - I am so glad I ended up giving it a shot after all! I absolutely LOVE the way you wrote Vegeta and Bulma's interactions before they left for space. Vegeta is downright vicious and cruel, and Bulma exasperated and confrontational. You give them a chance to actually maintain this kind of "relationship" for a while, which I found extremely satisfying. I have read quite a bit of B/V, and Vegeta is not usually this hateful in the beginning. I also think that the two of them usually "give in" to their overwhelming attraction to one another sooner. The chemicals in the water turned out to be a humerous and welcome pretext to get the two together, rather than some cheap and ridiculous excuse as I had dreaded.

Even after they gave in to their need for hydration and "suffered through" the sex, the story continued to be entertaining and very enjoyable. I commend you for writing Vegeta taken aback by these new feelings and the overall unknown situation he finds himself in, while not seeming pathetically in need of guidance. I also think that the 13th chapter you added was essential to understanding Vegeta's inner turmoil and was very well done. Yes, I've read more angsty stuff, but I do think Vegeta forcing himself on Bulma constitutes rape, and it seems incredibly ballsy for you to write such a scene. Kudos. It befitted Vegeta's character and made the story feel much more rounded and realistic. I don't know if you had plannend on continuing this story - I am assuming so; they ought to at least return to Earth before the story should be considered concluded - but I doubt you'll return to it. What a pity. I really enjoyed your writing and I would have loved to see more from you. Thanks for keeping me up all not, just reading "one more chapter"!
Guest chapter 14 . 11/27/2016
Loved it. I love the way you capture vegetas personality and same with bulmas. I think you are making vegeta a bigger dick then others might have. But I can't wait for the next chapter! You are very talented
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 14 . 11/14/2016
I mean we all know that Vegeta will take the road with her but it still makes for a good story. I know that you haven't updated in over a year. I do hope that you update. I am looking forward to the next chapter. :-)
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 13 . 11/14/2016
Well... that wasn't as dark as I thought it would be.
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 12 . 11/14/2016
Nice chapter. I enjoyed the date talk
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 11 . 11/14/2016
Oh man... pretty planet. And sheep-like creatures on stilts? Interesting.
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 10 . 11/14/2016
Oooooo~ Lovely. I really enjoyed this "remedy" of yours. It was nice not to see Vegeta not swearing our insulting her every minute. I love this gentle side of Vegeta.
Mistress 0f Dragons chapter 9 . 11/14/2016
Omg... wow. Poor Bulma.
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