Hey! I really like your story, how come I only encountered it now? - 3 - This story is kind of my thing, I love stories like this! And I found this one, I'm like 'in your face Kaito!' Not that I hate Kaito or anything, heck I love him! He's my favorite character in the whole series, I just really got a thing for love triangles. Hihi. :3 well your story is very well written and I enjoyed it. :D

O_O yes , I am a fan of KaiKo / AoKai or whatever . But this story!
It's amazing ! _V But it'll not change the fact that I'm a KA fan :P
I love how you wrote Saguru-san's character very well! XD
I remember Saguru in movie 10. .fishing! xD

Saguru is a flirt. And he did a great job here!
I'm so sad for both Aoko and Kaito.
Aoko - she's confused? maybe. That's what I think :P
Kaito - he's rejected! ,

And this line :
-They do something in that gold gilded room that is unquestionably the biggest mistake she will ever make.

I was like. O_O what the? Ly-chan and Jun-chan! .that!? _

Anyways , a very fantastic story indeed ;)

LOVE IT! *O*

YOU KNOW SOMETHING? I ONLY READ THIS BECAUSE I AM A FRIGGING MASOCHIST. AND IT DOES STING.

I actually ~like~ the way I think of Saguru, thank you very much. Your story just made me TWITCH. TWITCH. It is horrible.

BUT I AM CURIOUS, BUT I WILL NOT SUBSCRIBE TO THE STORY. *twitches*

The thing is, I'm already in the process of being converted into a DC yaoi fangirl somehow *I AM IN DENIAL* I will not go on to Hakuko.

No.

YOU GUYS ARE HORRIBLE.

AND I AM CURIOUS.

*hesitates and clicks the subscribe button discreetly*

((BTW AZNS REALLY FTWZOMFGYEY.))

D: Poor Kaito!

You guys are evil. Evil. Evil. EVIL. And you know what's worse? You write wonderfully. *sulks*

Am torn between rereading the prettiness (that would make it a third time, since I read your previous draft), and squirming because Hakuba is being so icky. Sorry. HE IS.

...but. "He'll shield you with another umbrella on a rainy day; I'll shield you with mine." *wobbles*

No! NO! This is bad, this is wrong! I want Kaito back. D:

Good God. That made me so happy.

I'm such a fan of alternate pairings and among them is HakubaxAoko.

...I'm also not a fan of unhealthy relationships.

But, once you get the other version written, I'd be more then happy to read~ *winkwink*

...okay...what can I say?...You want my opinion?

The writing: very beautiful. I loved how you expressed and wrote the scenes and Aoko feelings.

The plot and the pairing: Yuck...

Sorry hon, I'm a naturally KA fan...Don't get me wrong, like I said you write very very good! I love reading your fics (both, yours and jun-chan's) and I'm reading and reviewing it just because you two are involved with it...(and because jun-chan was getting on my nerves...)

But I still can't believe you wrote such a paring! *pouts**whimpers* And despite how you ended it (like sara-chan said) she still doesn't love him for the simple reason that he will never ever be Kaito, because let's face it...SHE LOVES KAITO and how do I know that? Because Gosho-sensei said so! THERE! xD

*sighs* Anyway...I'm off now to read sara-chan's KA fic...I need to put my fan girl side together again... You totally smashed it along with my heart...*cries*

I luv ya tons! Both of you! u

You know... you just broke my heart. And I'm not even kidding.

Because you two write well—amazingly well. The last line is beautiful; but it HURTS. I like Hakuba, as a character, a lot, but the funny thing is that he manages to seduce her —there's no other word— by doing everything that's most infuriating in him. It's very strange, how you did that.

... the strangest thing is, I don't think Aoko, even in your fic, can love Hakuba. It may just be my own fangirl inclination, but... it still feels as though she's trying to convince herself.

Wow. That almost hurt me to read. Not because it wasn't good, because it was! It was very well written and interesting, but poor Kaito! (Poor Aoko too, of course.)

Excellent Job! Keep writing!

~SS