I like it. It is calm soothing and a kind romantic story. Thanks for writing it! I shall read your other works and try to comment on them as soon as I read them.

Believable and nicely written. I have a great love for DA/P and all their possibilities. The story had such a natural flow while I was reading it. Ah, Piper. The temptations of the older generation!

maybe piper meets him at cyclonia

If only, if only...

Sorry it took me so long to review; I don't come here too often unless it's just to post my own fics XD;

Again, very good. But the only thing that threw me off track was the word "discombobulated". It sounded unusual with the serious tone of the rest of the story.

Keep writing! Any pairing or none at all, I'm interested in your progress.

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*gives you thumbs up*

That was extremely fresh, one of the more "ho snap, it's believable" Dark Ace/Piper stories. And their final conversation is a good wrap-up, but also a good introduction, to "Pied Piper." Although it started a little shaky... I think Piper might feel too much hate for him to actually keep him on the ship-she might want to turn him in rather than actually leave him on the Condor... the rest was nice. (He takes her out to dinner. NO ONE does that anymore. ARGH.)

Sorry it took me so long to review. I read it last night after getting your message but was too sleepy to bother. *hits myself*

Thanks for letting me know you wrote a sequel! Yay for DA/P. They need more love as a pairing.

Tomie

This is interesting. Since Piper always seems more mature than the boys, I can see her being interested in someone she could have an inteligent conversation with. Hope you continue with these stories.

Aww that was as cute as the other one! Your so good to making them cute! :D Please continue!