Reviews for Taking Umbridge
Aurelian16 chapter 2 . 6/25
Hi! I'd just like to thank you for writing this. Snape's view of events was really interesting. Umbridge was perfectly dark and sweet, terrifically in character. I'd be very interested in where this goes. How is Snape going to handle this disturbing new information and unsettling feelings of...whatever's not total disdain...almost empathy...needs more examination...? :) Anyway, if you're up for it after over a decade, I'd love to see this continue. So much that could be done with this, I'm hoping you might come back! Whatever you decide, if you see this, thank you for contributing this! I really enjoyed reading. Have a fantastic day!
lav-has-an-account chapter 1 . 8/29/2019
o shit this is good
ShabbyBeachNest chapter 2 . 7/14/2019
WOW! I am LOVING this story! I know you mentioned that you’re not one for long stories... But it’s tragic that there’s only two chapters written here. You are a BRILLIANT writer! Thank you for such a great start, and I pray that you continue!
iloveyou1234 chapter 2 . 1/13/2019
Good chapter!
Liz Jean Tonks chapter 1 . 12/31/2018
I've never read a better Umbridge fanfiction.
Honestly.
Generally, there are not so many Umbridge fics out there I think and in many fics she is simply cruel. That however isn't the point of her. She is not simply cruel. She is also "sweet" (and yes, watch the quotation marks :D) In your story she was very much in character, as annoying and cruel as ever. Awesome work.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2018
What if Harry inflated Dolores like a balloon and gaved a belly inflation just because Dolores is mean.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/20/2018
Sooo, is that the end?
seldombites chapter 2 . 9/24/2017
This is fantastic. I know it's been years, but please, please, please continue this.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/4/2016
Hey, so I know you haven't updated this story in like what? 7 years? But could you maybe just do one more chapter? Please?
YokaiAngel chapter 2 . 5/19/2016
Wow~~
E chapter 2 . 2/7/2016
This is really good
JadeIron chapter 2 . 11/11/2015
The feels! Love the story! Will it be continued?
MagicWriterK chapter 2 . 8/20/2015
So, J.K.R. killed Fred, but not the despicable toad known as Dolores J. Umbridge? HMMM. SEEMS LEGIT.
But all of his thoughts about Lily just broke my heart. "Lily? Lily, why have you been crying?" jUST THE IMAGE OF LITTLE SNAPE AND LITTLE LILY, SNAPE AWKWARLDY COMFORTING THE CRYING GIRL IS JUST TOO MUCH FOR ME.
Ooh look it's me chapter 2 . 3/31/2015
Okay- this is awesome. I love it! Everything is totally within character and a lot of it sounds almost like canon! :) good luck with your future writing!
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mandancie chapter 2 . 1/16/2015
oh wow! these were really good. I so hope that one day you will come back to these. :)
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