hey folks (including ayns and sky, if you ever read this, and anyone else who ever checks the reviews) i used to be Viva-Musica and then I finished being 12 lol - i actually wanted to review chapter 22 but... it... wouldn't... let me...? lmao i just had some thoughts i wanted to share.

wanted to say that charming's line (in chapter 22) about "now all you gotta do is get amnesia, go into a coma, and get pregnant!" is: brilliant. i've read this whole story probably like 10 times now, maybe more. so that bit? keep that in mind.

also wanted to add just a personal thought that's been ringing in my mind a lot these last few chapters (again around chapter 22 all the way down to like, 18? maybe even earlier?) which is, "so basically sabrina's kinda racist."

anyway, we READ ON! bloody love this fic it's so wild and dramatic you guys

Everytime i read this fanfic (especially this chapter) my life feels complete

An amazing FanFiction someone spoke of this to me on tumbler and I really enjoyed it I read it three days straight with out sleep I really like this wish you guys would most more content but this FanFiction is my first (sisters grim) an favorite one I read :3

what is wrong with goldi?! she's being so selfish!

I just gotta say this was the first And best fanfiction I've ever read. I can't read fanfic anymore cause it makes me cringe but this one will always be my favorite. This set the bar for me and I will always be grateful I got to read it.

''we need to talk about sex henry finished" i read that i was like.. oh shit what will my mom say when she finds this in my history btw i luv you fanfics so much!

I know this story is ancient so you probably don’t even check the comments but wow good job. Sabrina annoys the hell out of me but she does in the books too so it proves you captured her character perfectly lol. Good story.

Unpopular opinion? Sabrina Grimm is a shitty person. Also, reading this I had to add like 4 years to everyone’s age so it didn’t feel like pedophelia. That stuff aside a well written and great story.

All I can say is... wow. I just recently got (back) into the Sister's Grimm fandom, though I still was super late. I read the books after all of them were out. But back to this! When I first found this, I was excited to read this. It had so many chapters and it really interested me. I'm not really allowed to read fanfic, but I read this any moment I could, whether it be at school or 3 am in the morning. Even my friends complained that I was reading too much. This story has such a good plotline,and I really like it because 1,you guys didn't give up on it and 2,you explained why everything happened instead adding really unrealistic ideas (even though this universe is unrealistic). Though I'm not any type of professional for writing, I'd say this could be published if it wasn't fanfiction. Thank you guys so much, and even if others have said it multiple times or you never get to see this. All I have left to say is I got into this fandom way too late. I wish I had read this earlier.

wow. this really took me on a roller coaster of feels. Great story!

Definitely the best Sisters Grimm fanfic out there. I really loved how you guys kept the original main plotline to some degree yet added new elements to the story to make it into almost a sequel like version of the original series. I think the best fanfics are those that keep that original writing style and story settings but add newer bits to it- exactly what you guys did so successfully. I personally wanted to see the Puck Sabrina story a bit more in the original series, and I'm so happy that I found the perfect fanfic. And it's not just overly focused on just the two of them but really maintains the right balance between Puckabrina romance and Everafter mysteries. What was especially impressive was that you guys managed to really stick to the character personalities in the original series- for example like how Puck isn't suddenly this sweet guy just because he fell for Sabrina but still is the same old Trickster King. Daphne's character was also especially on point- and I also loved how you introduced a new character, Kerdy. And bringing in the goblin's mirror was super smart, since Puck and Sabrina, especially Puck, would like never admit that he likes her and it would take ages otherwise. The episodes were really creative- and using Sabrina's magic addiction in the original series to create something like the Heartless was really smart. Oh, and I loved the Puckabrina fluff too of course! The only 'criticism' I have is the use of the emoji/expression things (I don't really know what they're called). But it's because I'm not really used to seeing them in written work, and it's just like a minor thing. I mean, besides that one thing, all I have to say is that I really loved this fanfic, and you guys did a really great job.

This might not be the first fanfic I ever read, but it sure was up there. I guess a more appropriate way of wording it would be the first fanfic that made me realise the potential they had. Before, I liked fanfics, I thought they were cool, but that they were short and maybe not as great as cannon works. This one absolutely proved me wrong. It made me want to create something as magnificent. It took me a long time to read, but i I did so, without waning interest. I see reviews I left as a guest, one of the first times I ever reviewed a story, and I can see so clearly how far I’ve come. This made me laugh until people had to check I was okay, cry until I could barely see my screen, feel so strongly with the characters it hurt. I just found it again and repeated the cycle. It’s still just as fantastic. I still love it, so much. I’ve read it twice now, both times long after it was finished, but I felt like, and still feel like, this will never get old. Thank you so much. Thank you, thank you, thank you. I’ll never be able to say it enough times. But I’ll wind this up with one more: Thank you for inspiring me, and continuing to do so.
You’re both utterly amazing.

STAY AWAY FROM MY BABY!

OMG IM CRYING WITH SABRINA FOR NO REASON

NO! DONT USE IT! CANIS IS A GOOD GUY! (or wolf...?)