my dad did that once lol my brother james and i have a relationship were we are so close it is annoying and well my brother and i were arguing about who know what but he put us in an elevator at the school my uncle derek teaches at and well lets just say we were in there for about 4 hours lol now when ever we are arguing all my dad has to do is stare at us weird and we stop right then

I think Ziva is really mean to Tony, while he was the one saving her life. a life for a life, that's how it works, right? This is the first story that I'm thinking this, but I think it would've been better if Ziva'd stayed in Somalia.

I feel sorry for Dinozzo.

It's a good story, I really liked the beginning. -x.

Oh, let me be a fly on the wall! Can't wait to read the next chapter.

yay! I love new chapters! Its great to have Ziva back! And I love Tony buying her an apartment 5 doors down from his thats so like him! Cant wait for season 7 and the next chapter!

I came back to this story to see if you had taken any amount of the constructive criticisms left here to heart, and either started being more careful with your writing or found yourself a beta. I'm disappointed to see that neither has happened. It's a shame because I can see aspects of the story that I might enjoy, but I simply cannot get past these blatant errors that are really an issue of sheer laziness.

I implore you to treat your stories with more care than this. If you want a lot of people to stay with your stories, using proper grammar and capitalization goes a long, long way. As I said, I want to like this story, but I just can't get past the errors in your writing.

Somehow lost the story after chapter four. Read the rest and loved how they were able to rescue Ziva and that she is coming back to NCIS. Won't lose it again...update soon please.

This is a great story, keep up the good work. Update soon please.

more please! It's really good!

Ok all names have to be capitalized every time they are used yes it's true. NOw you also meess up times either stay in present tone or past, you can't have both. But other than that good chapter I hope Tony and Ziva get together soon.

Oh man! I am just on chapter 4 and it is great so far. I can't wait to read more. :) Take care now.

a come on ziva you can make it! Love the thoughts of Tony and Ziva in this chapter and love the bit where Ziva makes her choice! Cnat wait for the next chapter!

yay happy chapter!

*does happy dance around the room*

i officially love you.

she !

i get a little caught up in these as you could probably tell.i am currently spinning in my chair from you!

This would probably be a lot more enjoyable if you had a beta to correct a bunch of your mistakes. Those mistakes take me out of the story. Please find yourself a beta ASAP!

ah!i love it though.:)

Can you please write names with capital letters? Gee, double check your writing! I see you write them correctly sometimes so a little more attention should be great.