So damn hot! There needs to be more dominant Jeff! Especially with Phil!

Okay so your writing is good and the story flows... the only thing that puts me off is the fact that you don't use "and"... Sorry, & just looks retarded put into every little splice in the fic. Fix that and you'll be a great writer, but before doing that it'll only seem like you're one of those retarded fangirls the LiveJournal communities love to bash.

This is HOT!

this was really yummy! :P

i think it would be great if you added a chapter or made a sequel of punk getting dom'd by both jeff and chris! yummy! :D

please think about it!

note to self: dont badmouth Jeff!...or maybe i will...

Now, see, I'm the kind of author who likes Jeff to be as submissive as Phil was in tha first chapter...but I can't help but LOVE this.

This two-shot was just enough to give ME an orgasm, XD! It was beautifully written, showing off the fact that Jeff may be pretty but that he CAN top.

I loved Jeff fucking the hell out of Phil, you wrote that wonderfully and I love it when Chris gets his own turn at it, XD.

Brilliant.

That was so HOT! *pant*

You have to write more! Maybe a threesome? *drool*

Yummy!

That was so HOT!

Great story. Jeffy being all dominant... yummy!

That was hot. I think I need a cold shower now.

woohoo! It was as hot as I expected :)

Thanks for writing it!

Gotta love threesomes :)

oh I love it!

Damn, that was hot. I would love to see what Jeff would do to Chris.

Oh Phil was a bad boy and got punished good lol loved it. Hope there's going to be a second chapter with what Jeff does to chris :D