really liked your story I hope you continue writtng

I really enjoyed this story. I hope you finish it.

What happened? This was excellente

Good story. Too bad it wasn't continued.

Ok I've only read the first couple paragraphs of this chapter and I had to write a review. Really? So Chuck just let Sarah assume that and let Carina slap him and didn't explain. Not trying to beat up your story but this is just angst for the sake of angst, much like the show did a lot of the time. In no way do these events play out like this in real life.

Definitely an entertaining story but there are definitely places where grammar could use a little work. And some of the things the characters say don't make much sense or aren't believable but it's still a good read.

A few things though I don't think Bryce would crack about planning to kill someone after a few beers. It's a little unrealistic that Chuck doesn't drink alcohol and didn't have premarital sex. I get your trying to make home a good guy but come on, no one does those things anymore and you don't need to do those things to be a good guy. And finally why keep it a secret the fact that Chuck knows Bryce? Oh and in the last chapter they were already talking about being in love and being a family. That's extremely soon considering they only began a relationship a day ago.

Again entertaining story but there were definitely parts that could have used work.

Please continue

please continue

Great story and hope for a new chapter in the amazing story.

HELLO! THIS IS A GREAT STORY, WOULD LOVE IF HE KEPT WRITING. BYE

Just found this really good story. Too bad it seems abandoned. I hope someday you come back and finish it. It always strikes me when I see good stories remain unfinished. It kind of keeps them from being great and that is sad. Also noticed that you stopped updating it during season 3. Far too many authors left the fanbase then. Not sure if that was part of your reasoning but hopefully someday we will find out what happens when Chuck is away.

hii :) great story... I love it ...when do you continue?

I just got through reading this and I really hope you continue writting it ! It has become one of my favorite Sarah and Chuck non-spy fics I've read.

Please continue this story:):) only read it this year but It is defiantly one of the best I've write a new chapter!

Please continue! I love this story! Bryce is such a good bad guy! And I love the whole normal thing! Keep it up!