Please continue it soon I really enjoyed it

Good I liked how Hiashi misunderstood him and hope Naruto and Hinata get together soon. I was funny and hope for more

Hope you update Naruto and Hinata Forever:)

Dat ending. Family sword OP.

I'm sad that this seems to be abandoned, it's a really good read for what's here.

that was the funniest fic i have read in a long time

Hi!

I like it, really much and i hope you continue... sometime... soon... please? *-*...

Greetings! n_n

I really liked this story, I liked your portrayal of Naruto - but a few nitpicky things kept me from 100% absolute enjoyment. The whole "marriage by contract" thing seemed dropped or unresolved. The logic of movement from chapter to chapter wasn't very clear to me - (aside from Kurenai's) why they kept moving forward from place to place. Conversations didn't necessary have a logical flow, e.g. The "chest" conversation seemed sort of random, the pepper thing?. I liked the samisen bit (knowing the theme helped). I do think it is a good story - it kept me interested throughout - but like I said, it's just a few small things. Good work!

hey nuclear burp please update such a great story. The education of Naruto Uzumaki. love the story

Very fun and well done. I would like to read more.

LOL! Oh man, this is great. And here I thought that Hinata's dad wanted to have dinner with him. LOL! Poor Naruto. He's so misunderstood. LOL! I love how Hiashi makes her ettiquite lessons sound like an entirely different thing. I love it so far. Please update soon. I love the fact that Hinata lost her stutter and is so much more confident being around Naruto. The porr boy is so confused. Thank goodness he trusts Hinata to help him. He won't regret it in the end.

So on with the fight. I wonder what's going to happen. Naruto will probably try to explain to Hiashi what was really going on, right? Only to end up making things worse. LOL! I can only imagine. Hiashi will probably be making accusation that will fluster Naruto or get him mad, right? THen Hinata will step in and save the day, or night. LOL!

I love this very much so far and look forward to seeing it get updated.

Hinata is a bit to forward, but I still love this story.

this is what i expected of all chapters. naru/ hinata interaction, with misconceptions.

this chapter made no sense.

Hi Nuclear Burp,

I totally meant to reply to your PM a long time ago. It's been so long that you've probably forgotten all about it! Sorry! Better late than never?

Anyways, I read your fanfic "Manners and Mannerisms" before because I found it on Perpetual's NaruHina Fanfic Collection list. I liked it! Reading it made me smile. It's cute and funny.

You requested a critique, so here it is. I don't think there are many typos. Not any that I could spot right off the bat, anyways. Technically, your writing is clean (with few to no spelling/punctuation/grammatical errors). However, your writing style is... hmm... it's a bit random. What I mean is, you tend to ramble from one subject/scene to the next. And I know that's how Real Life conversations occur, but in writing, you need to be a little more structured. For example, I had trouble following chapter 4 (You cannot win without canny sins).

(Maybe I'm just slow, but I actually had to read it 3 times to understand the sequence of events that occurred in that chapter. ;)

Chapter 4 was felt random and disconnected to me for these reasons:

1. The chapter starts off with music and you leave some questions: Why are they playing music? Why are all those kunoichi gathered there in the first place? Chapter 3 ended on a sort of "cliffhanger" that didn't get a follow up in chapter 4.

2. The part I had to read 3 times: Why did Naruto get in trouble with Tsume and Anko? You told that part of the story in flashback dialogue after the fact. I found it hard to follow.

3. Was the part about Hinata's old teacher (and Tenten's mother) really necessary to the plot? It was interesting, but it didn't feel relevant. It felt like story filler.

Other than the points that I mentioned, I really enjoyed your story. I laughed aloud at several points (especially when Naruto talks about sticking chopsticks up his nose and when he talks about Neji "pitching a tent" for Tenten - and of course, Hiashi's misinterpretation of Naruto and Hinata's last conversation). Haha! I liked the ending of chapter 1: "For a start, Naruto-kun, you’ll need to learn some table manners." *grins* Classic! That line made me want to click the next button to read chapter 2. I also liked the ending of chapter 2: "Am I not a woman?" It was bittersweet. Poor Hinata! Naruto manages to hurt her without meaning to.

Please continue writing. I look forward to the next chapter!

Heh. I really like this chapter. Funny with a tinge of angst, and a bunch of Naruto's foot-in-mouth syndrome with a side plate of maturity. Well done.

On another note, I was wondering if you'd give Naruto an instrument to play? I mean, something like the Mountain Dulcimer/Bongo Drums would definitely suit him

w youtube com/watch?vrU2uU5KahP4 for the dulcimer.

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