Beautiful

Quit the masterpiece, moranfuly beautiful.

Beautiful

-Cat

Absolutely exquisite. You've done a magnificent job. I wouldn't change a word. You have expressed the inexpressible.

I do hope to read much more from you.

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderous story with us.

Brava.

I think I'm going to cry.

That was so beautiful. A haunting piece and so poetic. I know that's going to be following me around for the rest of the day - I can't get it out of my head.

So deep and it really did read like a dance.

Powerful and poignant.

~Damsel

Well executed plot line, and beautifully woven prose.

I'll keep this review short as the previous one was rather long. I am speechless, yet again your words put me in awe. You are an extremely creative individual and I can only pray one day I manage to reach such a level of devotion of and sincerity as you have.

This quite possibly has to be thee most BEAUTIFUL story I have EVER read in my entire history of reading fanfics. I cried. I swear to god... I cried. You're writing is breathtaking and so descriptive that the images you wrote were alive in my mind. The played out before me like the wonder of a movie. Please continue to write such masterpieces.

Simply put, that was beautiful!

I am really in love with your writing. You took history, psychology, and history and wove it into something that is amazing. You did Africa well, and the perspective of both mothers...wonderful.

If you have not done so already, please pursue publishing something in the near future. You are that good!

nice. it's a very sweet and well written story!

good job

Wow. You took me somewhere else with that. I can't wait to see what you come up with next. The extended metaphor of bleeding is carried all the way through - such strong, vivid imagery.

"Maybe he will never be ready for words." My favorite part. There is so much pain in that one sentence.

This is so inspiring. The lyricism and sheer beauty is astounding. I became so engrossed in the words and feeling of this story that by the end, I was only inches away from my monitor. This is the the type of story that takes several moments of reflection and a second read through before it can settle.

The interchanging between Amanda and Uhura was breathtaking. Just the beauty of this is amazing, the emotions come through so clearly. It's heartbreaking and I feel ready to cry. Very cathartic. Wonderful, wonderful writing.

That was poetic, poignant and beautifully written! :)

Wow. That. Was. Amazing. It was very poetic. I loved it. You are an amazing writer.